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Array ( [sid] => 121618 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Night On The Beach [time] => 2006-06-11 16:00:13 [hometext] => Just Fantasy [bodytext] => The stars are twinkling as I gaze up in the heavens
the night is warm while Im enjoying the vision

Walking on the beach my hair blowing in the wind
my feet feel so cool as they deepen in the sand

My mind is set on idle and my spirit is in settlement
the scent of the ocean gives of my nightly fragrance

Sensation of the warmth has me silken with moisture
making my bronze body glisten from the touch of oils

My sarong is swaying brushing against me without care
sending chills down my spine as if someone is here

Ive made the sand my bed just for this littlle while
and let my imagination give me a masculine profile [comments] => 7 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 40 [informant] => BRONZEN [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )

Night On The Beach

Contributed by BRONZEN on Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 04:00:13 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

The stars are twinkling as I gaze up in the heavens
the night is warm while Im enjoying the vision

Walking on the beach my hair blowing in the wind
my feet feel so cool as they deepen in the sand

My mind is set on idle and my spirit is in settlement
the scent of the ocean gives of my nightly fragrance

Sensation of the warmth has me silken with moisture
making my bronze body glisten from the touch of oils

My sarong is swaying brushing against me without care
sending chills down my spine as if someone is here

Ive made the sand my bed just for this littlle while
and let my imagination give me a masculine profile

Copyright © BRONZEN ... [ 2006-06-11 16:00:13]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Night On The Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 04:45:09 PM AEST
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Beautiful! It made ME feel at ease. It felt like I was there myself. Very good! I didn't care for the masculine profile bit, but I'm just one person. ;-)

Re: Night On The Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 08:33:16 PM AEST
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Oh, I was just speaking about the ocean, how I want so much to visit it. I love poems about the ocean, the beach, sea.. your poem allowed me to see so much view.
I love the sounds of those crying seagulls, feel of the wet sand, the salty air, breeze blowing in my face and hair.
I love the water, the sky, the gentleness,
I love to look for shells,
I love those little beach crabs how they run in the sand, as if the breeze carries them,
I love lighthouses,
I love to make sandcastles,
I love it all, its so carefree
and.. I love your poem
I love the title
....its time for me to go to the ocean, or write a poem about it ... lol.

I get lonely for it, I must go listen to my seashell, put it to my ear, to hear the ocean. My grandmother taught me, the ocean is in there. I still believe it. Of course its in there. Its magic, just like your beautiful poem.
rL

Re: Night On The Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 11:18:08 PM AEST
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..this is just what the doctor ordered.. no?.. a fitting follow-up to: "My day for Play"
nice.. (I hope you get to sooner than later)

great work~

B.

Re: Night On The Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 01:53:27 AM AEST
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I reminds me of a weekend at Daytona beach. Very nice fantasy.
Huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Night On The Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchHoward on Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 08:28:02 AM AEST
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There is something magical about walking by the ocean, alone with your thoughts. A peaceful and gentle place to ponder one' s innermost thoughts. I also felt like I was there -beautiful descriptive verses.
Butch

Re: Night On The Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by KarlaMarie on Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 09:08:41 AM AEST
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For a minute there i was back at schoolies sitting in the sand... the beaches where i went where beautiful and this brought back those thoughts and feelings!!!
I need another schoolies now!! All your fault!! lol

KarlaMarie

Re: Night On The Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 05:31:44 PM AEST
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What's nice about us poets writing fantasy into our work is that we can write it and resolve t' make it itinerary. Go live it, Bro! Great work!

wabl
KenMoore
cowboy

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