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Array ( [sid] => 121577 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A heart is just a heart [time] => 2006-06-10 14:18:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => step on to these sheets of me
silent on the floor, agree
"wouldn't you like to flee the scene?"

I know mom was once so proud
but i can't handle life so loud
"now i just adjust to sound"

nothing here reminds me of
the love i knew before i grew
nothing now can calm me down
i shake until i sleep no sound

piece me back to one whole sun
so i can be the smoking gun
"now it's safe to end this fun"

methadone i know is grown
cups of some just can't control
cravings came to send me hell
let me never come to tell
that it's all just a white flag waving....

dw [comments] => 5 [counter] => 274 [topic] => 73 [informant] => In_a_While [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

A heart is just a heart

Contributed by In_a_While on Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 02:18:53 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

step on to these sheets of me
silent on the floor, agree
"wouldn't you like to flee the scene?"

I know mom was once so proud
but i can't handle life so loud
"now i just adjust to sound"

nothing here reminds me of
the love i knew before i grew
nothing now can calm me down
i shake until i sleep no sound

piece me back to one whole sun
so i can be the smoking gun
"now it's safe to end this fun"

methadone i know is grown
cups of some just can't control
cravings came to send me hell
let me never come to tell
that it's all just a white flag waving....

dw

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Re: A heart is just a heart (User Rating: 1 )
by bronzen on Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 05:35:21 PM AEST
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good write

Re: A heart is just a heart (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 07:15:32 PM AEST
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You do have a way with the abstract Dwayne : )

Good to see you're still kicking about YPDC, and better yet; posting! Keep it up.

Scorp.

Re: A heart is just a heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 10:56:59 PM AEST
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the title is true... it IS..after all, just a heart..
but it's what's inside that matters~
Addiction is nothing new for me..and I only find it necessary to say:
"dreams are thoughts alone.. to bring about the metamorphisis: is healing.

Billy

Re: A heart is just a heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 05:15:45 PM AEST
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Thanks for sharing . Nice write

Whisper

Re: A heart is just a heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 08:03:16 PM AEST
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Dwayne~
A heart is just a heart, but what's inside this heart is what really matters. You're brilliant work reminds me so much of an artist and his painting. A picture says a thousand words. Well done my dear friend.
love, hugs n prayers,
~*suzie Q*~

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