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Im sittin in a room by myself no one else is there

This room is all white and nothin on the walls

There is no noise in this room sept the tickin of the clock

As every minute goes by, tick tick tick I sit there alone

There is a window in the corner of the room

You are standin there looking straight at me

I see it in your eyes, the hate you have

A smirk appears across your face and your eyes fill with dispair

You start laughin looking at me in the eyes

No noise is heard form this screeching laugh just the tickin of the clock

Everyone else appears beside you lookin at me along wit you

The laughin stops and the stares fill the room

The hurt seps thru the window flowin along the floor

It comes towards me I try to move but i cant

The hurt overtakes me goin inside and out

I dont no what is happenin i cant contorl it

It's all over as fast as it began

I look back at you starin at me thru the window

Everyone else has left, left you standin there by yourself

The window disappears and you are in the room

You drift towards me with that smirk across your face

Everything vanishes, you take everything along with you

All the hurt, the fear, the anger disappers and im left all alone by myself
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You

Contributed by Ferox5 on Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 02:09:23 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



You

Im sittin in a room by myself no one else is there

This room is all white and nothin on the walls

There is no noise in this room sept the tickin of the clock

As every minute goes by, tick tick tick I sit there alone

There is a window in the corner of the room

You are standin there looking straight at me

I see it in your eyes, the hate you have

A smirk appears across your face and your eyes fill with dispair

You start laughin looking at me in the eyes

No noise is heard form this screeching laugh just the tickin of the clock

Everyone else appears beside you lookin at me along wit you

The laughin stops and the stares fill the room

The hurt seps thru the window flowin along the floor

It comes towards me I try to move but i cant

The hurt overtakes me goin inside and out

I dont no what is happenin i cant contorl it

It's all over as fast as it began

I look back at you starin at me thru the window

Everyone else has left, left you standin there by yourself

The window disappears and you are in the room

You drift towards me with that smirk across your face

Everything vanishes, you take everything along with you

All the hurt, the fear, the anger disappers and im left all alone by myself




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Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 02:43:09 PM AEST
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wow not so long ago i was going through this,and unfortunately i lost that person.it sucks doesn't it,to see that person just drift away.......well its good to let it out.hope you're ok.take care.

Andrea


Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by bronzen on Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 05:36:32 PM AEST
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i can relate even though it was sibling good write




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