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with dead leaves in your hands..
even I, who'd known you all along and near,
was dumb, in a turmoil of speech.

You came out of a confusion of people
with new flowers in your hands;
from out' the Green and Gold of June..
and I had found you again, but not alone.

WK ~ 2006 [comments] => 8 [counter] => 241 [topic] => 73 [informant] => Man_On_High [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 21 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

..brooding the moment

Contributed by Man_On_High on Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 02:05:28 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract

...you reared and nurtured, from out the nowhere of past
with dead leaves in your hands..
even I, who'd known you all along and near,
was dumb, in a turmoil of speech.

You came out of a confusion of people
with new flowers in your hands;
from out' the Green and Gold of June..
and I had found you again, but not alone.

WK ~ 2006

Copyright © Man_On_High ... [ 2006-06-10 02:05:28]
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Re: ..brooding the moment (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 02:31:02 AM AEST
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oooooooooouuuuuuuuuuuiiii
this one has a bit to it.
Great work.
huggs,
emy

Re: ..brooding the moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 10:08:09 AM AEST
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brooding the moment- of undefined thought ..
abstract indeed!

there is so much more here that what is written.

Clarity and truth shall find there way in a word of
bitter acrimony. For those who wish it, it can be the
most glorious of revelations. [Though, I have been
known to enjoy a good brood or two]

~Breezy

Re: ..brooding the moment (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 03:05:39 PM AEST
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I'm liking the emotional sentiment you've expressed here Billy. Good to visit your account page once more...

Scorp.

Re: ..brooding the moment (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 08:12:57 PM AEST
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another awesome write bro..such a profound thought, i love it.

wiz

Re: ..brooding the moment (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 08:02:25 PM AEST
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Words spoken from the heart
Very good write..
God Bless!

Re: ..brooding the moment (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 08:03:44 PM AEST
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This one is with great sentiment, yet I will re-read over and over. Wonderful write of abstatact.

Re: ..brooding the moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 08:58:37 PM AEST
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Billy~
I feel there is much more to this my dear friend. The emotional senitiments you pen for us to read are ever so heartfelt Billy~
Your natural talent in writing is amazing. You know exactly what u want ur reader to feel through ur well ascribed verses. You are truly an extraordinary poet my sweet friend. I bow to ur excellence.
love ya,
~*suzie Q*~

Re: ..brooding the moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 09:32:42 PM AEST
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This was a punch in the gut, great impact especially that last line. U my friend, need 2 be teaching in tha university that starts with the letter " H " i assume jmay be a few blocks away from u there. That is when your not on some lecture tour, or book signing. Very scholarly work my new england bretheren, yet slightly fused with a twang of twain, aka. Samuel Clemons. Great work Bill.

Ben

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