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Array ( [sid] => 12156 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Only the Blowing of the Wind [time] => 2003-02-08 03:20:00 [hometext] => I dedicate it to Charles and Shaun, may they rest in peace. [bodytext] => The gate is pushed open
And onto the lush, green grass we go.
We move forward
Into the land of the dead.

Each gravestone tells a story
Some short, some long.
Each with their own
Unique experiences.

To the left, Derrick Miser,
born in the 1927,
Laid to rest in 1945.
A victim of war.

Llara Frank, only a child,
was death's victim
Before reaching a year of life.
In the hands of God she sits.

We continue on
deeper into the cemetary,
Respectfully striding
Through the lanes.

Only the blowing of the wind
Can be heard
As it rustles the tree leaves,
Adding to the reverent silence.

You can hear the preacher
Saying his prayers for peace,
And the sound of cars
Driving away from the site and the sadness.

I await the setting of the casket.
I remember the one now dead.
I think about the gravestone
And how it can't summarize his life.

My life.

The casket is lowered into the ground,
My final resting point.
With a heavy heart,
I travel home. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 478 [topic] => 55 [informant] => TheSpiritx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
Only the Blowing of the Wind

Contributed by TheSpiritx on Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 03:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



The gate is pushed open
And onto the lush, green grass we go.
We move forward
Into the land of the dead.

Each gravestone tells a story
Some short, some long.
Each with their own
Unique experiences.

To the left, Derrick Miser,
born in the 1927,
Laid to rest in 1945.
A victim of war.

Llara Frank, only a child,
was death's victim
Before reaching a year of life.
In the hands of God she sits.

We continue on
deeper into the cemetary,
Respectfully striding
Through the lanes.

Only the blowing of the wind
Can be heard
As it rustles the tree leaves,
Adding to the reverent silence.

You can hear the preacher
Saying his prayers for peace,
And the sound of cars
Driving away from the site and the sadness.

I await the setting of the casket.
I remember the one now dead.
I think about the gravestone
And how it can't summarize his life.

My life.

The casket is lowered into the ground,
My final resting point.
With a heavy heart,
I travel home.




Copyright © TheSpiritx ... [ 2003-02-08 03:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Only the Blowing of the Wind (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 04:17:04 AM AEST
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very moving....i like it.....losing loved ones is hard....good luck making it through


Re: Only the Blowing of the Wind (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 12:37:01 PM AEST
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fantastic wording so very moving, really enjoyed this, thanks


Re: Only the Blowing of the Wind (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 09:03:28 PM AEST
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such a beautiful dedication, thank you for sharing

Lindsey


Re: Only the Blowing of the Wind (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 11:22:11 PM AEST
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So sad but so beautifully written, Spiritx... Missed you...
Jenni




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