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Array ( [sid] => 121557 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => need title!!!!!!! [time] => 2006-06-09 22:18:42 [hometext] => please comment right now and suggest a title, it is a poem written for my brother on his 21st [bodytext] => With all the powerful lines you have
You retrieve the downfallen
And steady the strong

Life ahead and life behind
Decisions made and corners turned
Questioning if you’re wrong

Times too fast to wait for you
Passing over twenty-one
Heading towards twenty-two

A little blonde girl with big blue eyes
Stares up at the man you’ve become
Asking what to do

You look up at the one above you
Only to realise, that it is within
The answers you seek

photos capture
the spirit I think of
every day of the week

I am not left empty
After the sound of your voice
You raise the strength within

I only hope
That you continue to find
The courage to be the man we all adore

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need title!!!!!!!

Contributed by guiltycircles on Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 10:18:42 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

With all the powerful lines you have
You retrieve the downfallen
And steady the strong

Life ahead and life behind
Decisions made and corners turned
Questioning if you’re wrong

Times too fast to wait for you
Passing over twenty-one
Heading towards twenty-two

A little blonde girl with big blue eyes
Stares up at the man you’ve become
Asking what to do

You look up at the one above you
Only to realise, that it is within
The answers you seek

photos capture
the spirit I think of
every day of the week

I am not left empty
After the sound of your voice
You raise the strength within

I only hope
That you continue to find
The courage to be the man we all adore

Copyright Â© guiltycircles ... [ 2006-06-09 22:18:42]
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Re: need title!!!!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by bronzen on Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 11:03:17 PM AEST
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Handle grown man's business

Re: need title!!!!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 02:49:01 AM AEST
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man we all adore
would be a great title.
very good write and I'm sure it will be cherished.
huggs, smiles, happy b day bro,
emy

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