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Array ( [sid] => 121549 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => naive fascination [time] => 2006-06-09 19:24:51 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Try to take the chains of my anger
away from the darkness I bring
Place them above the release of my answer
when you ask me to break through your skin

Don't be so quick to destroy your own memories
Keep them with you 'til the end
For when I reply to your broken religion
you'll know I was never a friend

Can't you survive without begging for me
to intrude on your every desire
Give yourself time
Think about what you want
I'm not God and I don't love a trier

If this is your wish and you really believe
that it's me that you want in your death
lay down
Think of me and the pleasures I have
then I'll kiss you and take your last breath

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 333 [topic] => 13 [informant] => deadclown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

naive fascination

Contributed by deadclown on Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 07:24:51 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Try to take the chains of my anger
away from the darkness I bring
Place them above the release of my answer
when you ask me to break through your skin

Don't be so quick to destroy your own memories
Keep them with you 'til the end
For when I reply to your broken religion
you'll know I was never a friend

Can't you survive without begging for me
to intrude on your every desire
Give yourself time
Think about what you want
I'm not God and I don't love a trier

If this is your wish and you really believe
that it's me that you want in your death
lay down
Think of me and the pleasures I have
then I'll kiss you and take your last breath

Copyright © deadclown ... [ 2006-06-09 19:24:51]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: naive fascination (User Rating: 1 )
by bronzen on Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 11:17:04 PM AEST
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i like this write

Re: naive fascination (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 01:49:44 PM AEST
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Good Write.

Re: naive fascination (User Rating: 1 )
by allie_07 on Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 07:19:21 PM AEST
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wonderful piece

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