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Array ( [sid] => 121514 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Door [time] => 2006-06-09 01:50:38 [hometext] => What lies ahead spiritually [bodytext] => Theres a fog surrounding me
Im feeling my way through the
mist
Im getting a feeling of anxiety
while having a hankering need
to persist

I can't determine my journey
ahead
but the signals of reliance is
well-read

Focusing my eyes vaguely I see
the door
it had light seeping through and
clearly it states explore

My legs are willing to proceed
but my spirit is hesitating
I sought myself one last time
into believing

Im trying to reach the door
my spirit is pulling me back
I know I have this one last
chance I cant become side-
tracked
the door is slowly closing Im
racing against the time
this is my moment just this
moment in my prime

I finally built up my spirits
and did away with the noose
I know the door is shutting
on every given excuse

Screaming! Screaming!
here I come
please keep the door open
Im just a few seconds away
your my answer Im for certain









[comments] => 3 [counter] => 286 [topic] => 19 [informant] => BRONZEN [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )
The Door

Contributed by BRONZEN on Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 01:50:38 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



Theres a fog surrounding me
Im feeling my way through the
mist
Im getting a feeling of anxiety
while having a hankering need
to persist

I can't determine my journey
ahead
but the signals of reliance is
well-read

Focusing my eyes vaguely I see
the door
it had light seeping through and
clearly it states explore

My legs are willing to proceed
but my spirit is hesitating
I sought myself one last time
into believing

Im trying to reach the door
my spirit is pulling me back
I know I have this one last
chance I cant become side-
tracked
the door is slowly closing Im
racing against the time
this is my moment just this
moment in my prime

I finally built up my spirits
and did away with the noose
I know the door is shutting
on every given excuse

Screaming! Screaming!
here I come
please keep the door open
Im just a few seconds away
your my answer Im for certain













Copyright © BRONZEN ... [ 2006-06-09 01:50:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: The Door (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 09:07:18 AM AEST
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The anguish of unce rtainty of poignantly expressed in this work.
But we know who is the door.
"I am the door" have no fear.

his beautiful poem makes the reader meditate and try to decide well.
Hugs
Elizabeth


Re: The Door (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 01:21:06 PM AEST
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"but my spirit is hesitating"

Good write! Don't think it's yer spirit; it's something else. Go open that door! I keep mine open! Just posted An Open Door right before I found your post, ya might wanna check mine out.

wabl
KenMoore


Re: The Door (User Rating: 1 )
by Adelle on Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 02:00:37 AM AEST
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loved it! really really good poem... your a fantastic writer... go on out that door!
shanna




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