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Array ( [sid] => 121508 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My body once proud [time] => 2006-06-08 21:55:36 [hometext] => Why does she fight her saviour [bodytext] => Hear my voice
I scream your name
You curse my mind
I bear the shame

Upon my brow
Lines of age and pain grow deep
Yet still I yearn for you
Your memory I long to keep

Why must you torture me so
I held you in such high regard
You were my world
Now my soul forever scared

Your tender touch
Has turned to stone
I long for it to return
To the way I had once known

Your hand held against me
Used to hold me when I cried
Now you cause my tears
No matter how hard I have tried

I thought you loved me
But now I see
It was never me you loved
But my body I gave for free

My body once proud
Is scared with your travel
Only now that I am near an end
Has this meaning been unraveled

Tell me
Did you feel my pain
When your butchery tortured me
When you drove me insane

You are my mind
You are my life
Your presents torments
Causing emotional strife

How can I love you
After all you put me through
How can I still love such a bastard
Whose sadism I knew

Why do I fight the freedom
Shown to me by this saviour
Given by mercy
I am granted an angels favour

But I only want to return to you
I wish for your punishment
Then your woeful apologies
I beg for your judgement

My angel can not help me
No matter how hard I try
Nothing can save me
I belong to your lie

KarlaMarie [comments] => 4 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 13 [informant] => KarlaMarie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
My body once proud

Contributed by KarlaMarie on Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 09:55:36 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Hear my voice
I scream your name
You curse my mind
I bear the shame

Upon my brow
Lines of age and pain grow deep
Yet still I yearn for you
Your memory I long to keep

Why must you torture me so
I held you in such high regard
You were my world
Now my soul forever scared

Your tender touch
Has turned to stone
I long for it to return
To the way I had once known

Your hand held against me
Used to hold me when I cried
Now you cause my tears
No matter how hard I have tried

I thought you loved me
But now I see
It was never me you loved
But my body I gave for free

My body once proud
Is scared with your travel
Only now that I am near an end
Has this meaning been unraveled

Tell me
Did you feel my pain
When your butchery tortured me
When you drove me insane

You are my mind
You are my life
Your presents torments
Causing emotional strife

How can I love you
After all you put me through
How can I still love such a bastard
Whose sadism I knew

Why do I fight the freedom
Shown to me by this saviour
Given by mercy
I am granted an angels favour

But I only want to return to you
I wish for your punishment
Then your woeful apologies
I beg for your judgement

My angel can not help me
No matter how hard I try
Nothing can save me
I belong to your lie

KarlaMarie




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Re: My body once proud (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 10:47:50 PM AEST
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~*KarlaMarie*~
Most impressive are the contents of ur pages. The first time I read ur work.
A very well penned poem. I shall be sure to read some more of ur great work. Well done.
warm hugs,
~*suzie Q*~


Re: My body once proud (User Rating: 1 )
by bronzen on Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 01:15:49 AM AEST
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very well written


Re: My body once proud (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 03:20:44 PM AEST
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Nice write that .Words well choosen.

Whisper


Re: My body once proud (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 05:21:07 PM AEST
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nice write, deep




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