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Array ( [sid] => 121472 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Most Peculiar Rhyme [time] => 2006-06-08 02:34:14 [hometext] => Just me writing in my strange style, hope you appreciate the humour. Sue x [bodytext] => Paint a picture of a rainbow,
And a bridge of cobbled stone,
And a lady on the riverbank,
Will surely set the tone,

Think of summer in the countryside,
Or romance in the dales,
Or unrequited love,
All at once the picture pales,

Paint a wood of fine trees,
And a woodcutter as well,
Bring the lady out a walking,
And you have a tale to tell,

Let the two people meet,
And let them become friends,
No not married or a couple,
Like most stories end,

This is not a happy ever after,
Its a rhyme that has no reason,
for it only goes to show,
We are in the silly season,

So paint your picture of your rainbow,
And your bridge of cobble stone,
But please omit your lady,
She's decided to stay home.
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A Most Peculiar Rhyme

Contributed by jerseysue on Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 02:34:14 AM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

Paint a picture of a rainbow,
And a bridge of cobbled stone,
And a lady on the riverbank,
Will surely set the tone,

Think of summer in the countryside,
Or romance in the dales,
Or unrequited love,
All at once the picture pales,

Paint a wood of fine trees,
And a woodcutter as well,
Bring the lady out a walking,
And you have a tale to tell,

Let the two people meet,
And let them become friends,
No not married or a couple,
Like most stories end,

This is not a happy ever after,
Its a rhyme that has no reason,
for it only goes to show,
We are in the silly season,

So paint your picture of your rainbow,
And your bridge of cobble stone,
But please omit your lady,
She's decided to stay home.

Copyright © jerseysue ... [ 2006-06-08 02:34:14]
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Re: A Most Peculiar Rhyme (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 02:42:46 AM AEST
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This is adorable! "We are in the silly season"... I love that! Personally, I think the value of 'silly' is hugely underestimated far too often.

Enjoyable write!

~Snemmy

Re: A Most Peculiar Rhyme (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 02:45:34 AM AEST
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Very good write!
Your own unique way is what writing is about to me.
Mucho widsom in your words. keep writin-n-I'll keep redin.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: A Most Peculiar Rhyme (User Rating: 1 )
by blackprayer on Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 09:10:00 AM AEST
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I liked this. Your style, thankfully :), works for you very well and you do create splendidly.

Re: A Most Peculiar Rhyme (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 10:40:00 AM AEST
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Not such a strange style fer a "miner's daughter". Snemmy got it right in her comments. Adorable and enjoyable write, lightheartedness in the "silly season". Beautiful, buddy.

wabl
KenMoore
cowboy

Re: A Most Peculiar Rhyme (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 11:22:25 AM AEST
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Oh this is too funny!!!
I love your ending especially.
Thanks for the smile!

Re: A Most Peculiar Rhyme (User Rating: 1 )
by bronzen on Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 01:21:36 AM AEST
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really nice

Re: A Most Peculiar Rhyme (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 03:22:08 AM AEST
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Sue~
A most impressive write that had me wearing a big smile. I'm becoming a real fan of ur brilliant work Sue~ I thoroughly enjoyed it from start to finish. Keep up the great work.
warm oz hugs,
~*suzie Q*~

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