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I fall to the ground and fall into a rest
a bullet has blown through my heart
my love enternily falling apart
bleeding onto the floor as I clutch the hole
fearing that death would take my soul
yet the only thoughts I really had as I laid there dying
was the thought of you seldomly crying

that's all I really ever thought about
was you...i've always cared for you without a shadow of a doubt
I wish you could only understand
that this didn't turned out the way I had planned

I never got to hold you in my arms to keep you from your fears
and it always seemed that I only provoked all those tears
good intentions always end up leaving a bad scar
and with this bullet in my chest.....well you know what mine are.
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The Bullet Hole

Contributed by Dragontear27 on Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 11:10:05 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

An instant pain tearing through my chest
I fall to the ground and fall into a rest
a bullet has blown through my heart
my love enternily falling apart
bleeding onto the floor as I clutch the hole
fearing that death would take my soul
yet the only thoughts I really had as I laid there dying
was the thought of you seldomly crying

that's all I really ever thought about
was you...i've always cared for you without a shadow of a doubt
I wish you could only understand
that this didn't turned out the way I had planned

I never got to hold you in my arms to keep you from your fears
and it always seemed that I only provoked all those tears
good intentions always end up leaving a bad scar
and with this bullet in my chest.....well you know what mine are.

Copyright © Dragontear27 ... [ 2006-06-06 23:10:05]
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Re: The Bullet Hole (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 11:59:01 PM AEST
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--that's all I really ever thought about
was you...i've always cared for you without a shadow of a doubt-- nice.... good write. i liked this, sad but well written! A+++

Re: The Bullet Hole (User Rating: 1 )
by bronzen on Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 03:50:35 PM AEST
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yes sad and emotional but good write

Re: The Bullet Hole (User Rating: 1 )
by droughp on Saturday, 8th September 2007 @ 08:36:44 AM AEST
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Aww, so sweet. I love your poetry, it flows smoothly and portrays emotion.
Well done.

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