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Array ( [sid] => 121371 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Nightmares are my reality [time] => 2006-06-06 10:56:58 [hometext] => this is dedicated to my brother kenny; it's been almost ten years since his death, but it's so hard to let go!!! please comment afterwards, thx$$$ [bodytext] => I remember when we use to smoke out with that Hawaiian green, now its like my nightmares became my reality.



Some would say we were gangsters, but we just kept the hood in our hearts. Its been about ten years since your death, the death that took me apart.



They said we had beef, but we just couldnt see eye to eye, and for those who thought I had a place in your misfortune are fools, the truth lies between you and I.



There are some speculations about who took you down, but as your brother; trust me when I tell you, what goes around, must come back around.



I aint snitching because you wouldnt want me to tell the cops. We took an oath from the start, keep it in the streets, and watch your enemies blood start to drop.



Id prayed to God to wash your pain with my hands, and I told Him, I bet you cant catch his killer before I can.



Im sorry I didnt make it to pay my respects when they laid you down; its just hard to show you love when your six feet underground.



I couldnt bring myself together or find the proper words to say, all I know is that I should of went to Heaven and God should of let you stay.



But Im still here and I cried out all my mournful tears, its like your death kept me stronger longer throughout the painful years.



They said take it as a sign, but I was still tripping like I was in a dream, until I saw your picture in the obituaries, then I knew my nightmares became my reality.

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Nightmares are my reality

Contributed by THUGGIN4REAL on Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 10:56:58 AM in AEST
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I remember when we use to smoke out with that Hawaiian green, now its like my nightmares became my reality.



Some would say we were gangsters, but we just kept the hood in our hearts. Its been about ten years since your death, the death that took me apart.



They said we had beef, but we just couldnt see eye to eye, and for those who thought I had a place in your misfortune are fools, the truth lies between you and I.



There are some speculations about who took you down, but as your brother; trust me when I tell you, what goes around, must come back around.



I aint snitching because you wouldnt want me to tell the cops. We took an oath from the start, keep it in the streets, and watch your enemies blood start to drop.



Id prayed to God to wash your pain with my hands, and I told Him, I bet you cant catch his killer before I can.



Im sorry I didnt make it to pay my respects when they laid you down; its just hard to show you love when your six feet underground.



I couldnt bring myself together or find the proper words to say, all I know is that I should of went to Heaven and God should of let you stay.



But Im still here and I cried out all my mournful tears, its like your death kept me stronger longer throughout the painful years.



They said take it as a sign, but I was still tripping like I was in a dream, until I saw your picture in the obituaries, then I knew my nightmares became my reality.





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Re: Nightmares are my reality (User Rating: 1 )
by jaa0726 on Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 11:05:00 AM AEST
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hey great poem.. im really srry about your bro...


Re: Nightmares are my reality (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 11:31:51 AM AEST
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If your brother could read this..he'd be really proud. great poem.


Re: Nightmares are my reality (User Rating: 1 )
by BrokenXbyManyX on Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 03:00:13 PM AEST
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Hey, this is really good. I'm sorry about the tragedy, tho 4 real. Keep writin tho, this one's good.


Re: Nightmares are my reality (User Rating: 1 )
by bronzen on Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 03:04:58 PM AEST
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so much sentiment i feel i know you still feel pain i lost a sister not to thug but being unloved so pray to God to take away the the grudges if any so you can go on with your life we need our young men today and lead this world and the right and correct the ones coming up don't forget him just do positive things in his memory i'm tired of the violence in the streets and sometimes we have to let go and move on your brother looking down in you want you to proceed forward don't be another statistic of our society we're losing our young men to senseless ordeals when there is so much more to life that can make your heart content and i feel that's the way to rectify your brother's death i wish the best for you i have passion for these situations


Re: Nightmares are my reality (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 10:46:31 PM AEST
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Wow i am impress with this write.
I am sure if your brother ever read this he would of been proud.




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