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Array ( [sid] => 12137 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Way [time] => 2003-02-08 00:20:44 [hometext] => uhm.. i sorta stoled some of the lines from Sugarcult's Song Pretty Girl (The Way) i liked it lots.. >_< [bodytext] => it's the way..
that he makes you feel..
whenever he walks away
and..
it's the way that he kisses you..
then increases all the pain..
it's the way that he makes you smile...
then turns around and makes you cry..
it's the way that you hate him..
but love him..
all at the same time..

i feel your pain..
as i feel mine..
it's the way i cry..
and the way he smiles..
he smiles because he knows..
that i'm in pain..
and i'll love him no matter what..
but he'll never love me the same..

your very first love..
is so hard to lose..
but you must realize..
there's nothing you can do..
to fill the empty hole..
that's rotting in your heart..
seems like an endless challenge..
not knowing where to start..

not knowing where to end..
not knowing what to do..
never falling in love again..
never finding someone new..

you'll always long for your first love..
as i long for mine..
you'll always remember that perfect kiss..
and his perfect smile.. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Spasmodic_Reality [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
The Way

Contributed by Spasmodic_Reality on Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 12:20:44 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



it's the way..
that he makes you feel..
whenever he walks away
and..
it's the way that he kisses you..
then increases all the pain..
it's the way that he makes you smile...
then turns around and makes you cry..
it's the way that you hate him..
but love him..
all at the same time..

i feel your pain..
as i feel mine..
it's the way i cry..
and the way he smiles..
he smiles because he knows..
that i'm in pain..
and i'll love him no matter what..
but he'll never love me the same..

your very first love..
is so hard to lose..
but you must realize..
there's nothing you can do..
to fill the empty hole..
that's rotting in your heart..
seems like an endless challenge..
not knowing where to start..

not knowing where to end..
not knowing what to do..
never falling in love again..
never finding someone new..

you'll always long for your first love..
as i long for mine..
you'll always remember that perfect kiss..
and his perfect smile..




Copyright © Spasmodic_Reality ... [ 2003-02-08 00:20:44]
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Re: The Way (User Rating: 1 )
by cant-skate on Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 01:07:27 AM AEST
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So beautiful and well-written!MUCH better than the lyrics of "pretty girl"!


Re: The Way (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 02:08:31 AM AEST
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yep, you got this one spot on, great write, we've all been there and like you say sometimes we are always there




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