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you wanna cry your heart out and you don't know why
have you ever felt never good enough ?
like this world is just too tough
you feel like if you give it your all,
theres no point cuz you're just gonna fall
have you ever felt way too stressed ?
like everyday, everynight you have to be the best
they put so much pressure on you and expect so much
you feel too useless for anyones look or touch
have you ever wanted to sit in the rain?
cuz no one could see your tears or pain
and the sky is crying just like you
you seem to fail in everything you do
have you ever just wanted to sit and cry?
cuz you feel like theres no point in trying
when every single day you feel like crying

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Have you ever....?

Contributed by xforever_faking_a_smile3x on Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 06:35:41 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

have you ever just wanted to sit and cry ?
you wanna cry your heart out and you don't know why
have you ever felt never good enough ?
like this world is just too tough
you feel like if you give it your all,
theres no point cuz you're just gonna fall
have you ever felt way too stressed ?
like everyday, everynight you have to be the best
they put so much pressure on you and expect so much
you feel too useless for anyones look or touch
have you ever wanted to sit in the rain?
cuz no one could see your tears or pain
and the sky is crying just like you
you seem to fail in everything you do
have you ever just wanted to sit and cry?
cuz you feel like theres no point in trying
when every single day you feel like crying

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Re: Have you ever....? (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmokin on Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 06:43:17 PM AEST
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lovely piece well crafted, thanx for sharing :-)

Re: Have you ever....? (User Rating: 1 )
by Lilbabe on Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 07:21:35 PM AEST
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this poem made me feel like crying. it's exactly how i feel. I LOVE IT!!! i feel so useless...like i shouldn't even try. this is one of maybe 2 or 3 poems that ever made me cry. great job,
~lexy~

Re: Have you ever....? (User Rating: 1 )
by KarlaMarie on Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 09:30:48 PM AEST
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I read this as i have a poem of the same name, and i can only say mine is not as good as yours, this was great!

KarlaMarie

Re: Have you ever....? (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 01:34:50 AM AEST
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I feel like this quite a lot, yes and hide tears in the rain. Loved it. Sue x

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