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Array ( [sid] => 121329 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Unspoken Girl [time] => 2006-06-05 17:10:30 [hometext] => The unsaid is more important than the said. This poem is about a certain girl and the mistakes she made. People just won't let her forget how out of control she was. People can be SO judgemental and hypocritcal...enjoy. [bodytext] => The Unspoken words of the girl in the corner.
Pretty, yet alone with no one to talk to.
Have you ever talked to her?
Do you know how beautiful her heart is?

She gets talked about by all the guys.
They talk about how fun and easy she is.
The snickers as she walks by is more than she can take.
She'd like to talk to someone but people don't understand.

Instead, everything is left unspoken.
The habits she picked up on were not the best.
She realizes that.
But instead people won't forgive her for her past.

She sit's alone as people stare.
Trying to fit it the right way.
All she did was make a few mistakes.
Soon they wouldn't matter.

She caused scenes through out the school.
People made jokes and made her miserable.
Knowing they are making the same mistakes,
they still judge.

Why can't she just go back?
Take it all back in an instance?
Make people see the good?
If only she had another chance...
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 198 [topic] => 61 [informant] => BrokenXByManyX [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
The Unspoken Girl

Contributed by BrokenXByManyX on Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 05:10:30 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



The Unspoken words of the girl in the corner.
Pretty, yet alone with no one to talk to.
Have you ever talked to her?
Do you know how beautiful her heart is?

She gets talked about by all the guys.
They talk about how fun and easy she is.
The snickers as she walks by is more than she can take.
She'd like to talk to someone but people don't understand.

Instead, everything is left unspoken.
The habits she picked up on were not the best.
She realizes that.
But instead people won't forgive her for her past.

She sit's alone as people stare.
Trying to fit it the right way.
All she did was make a few mistakes.
Soon they wouldn't matter.

She caused scenes through out the school.
People made jokes and made her miserable.
Knowing they are making the same mistakes,
they still judge.

Why can't she just go back?
Take it all back in an instance?
Make people see the good?
If only she had another chance...




Copyright © BrokenXByManyX ... [ 2006-06-05 17:10:30]
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Re: The Unspoken Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 05:46:57 PM AEST
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HEY THIS ONE'S A REALLY GOOD POEM!
keep up the good work...


Re: The Unspoken Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by big_B on Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 10:28:30 PM AEST
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its me bigb

what a right i aplaud it, seriously.

really i love it




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