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Array ( [sid] => 121284 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => So much for time... [time] => 2006-06-04 19:13:36 [hometext] => I wrote this cuz im still stuck on loosing someone i loved my very first love that died by suicide.....and how i thought time was suppose to heal the wound....its been a year and it still hurts as much as the day he died [bodytext] => I thought time was suppose to heal the deepest wounds
Heal killing pain and rebuild shattered remains and ruins
But im still hurting just like the day i fell apart
Scared to trust and too scared to give away my heart
After all its still not fixed from the day it was broken
Still regretting the feeling never showed, and the words never spoken
I can never go back I can never see you again
So im left here still crying over the emptiness within
I never got to see you off or even say goodbye
Without you here by my side all i ever want to do is die
But i know your one wish for me was to to stick life out
I only see you in my dreams and I know what they will always be about
About how i promised i would never leave you but look at us now
So far apart i cant lean on you but i know i must carry on somehow
So what am i suppose to do when i still cant get over the past
Time was suppose to heal but i guess my pain is here to last...
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So much for time...

Contributed by Nothingness on Sunday, 4th June 2006 @ 07:13:36 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I thought time was suppose to heal the deepest wounds
Heal killing pain and rebuild shattered remains and ruins
But im still hurting just like the day i fell apart
Scared to trust and too scared to give away my heart
After all its still not fixed from the day it was broken
Still regretting the feeling never showed, and the words never spoken
I can never go back I can never see you again
So im left here still crying over the emptiness within
I never got to see you off or even say goodbye
Without you here by my side all i ever want to do is die
But i know your one wish for me was to to stick life out
I only see you in my dreams and I know what they will always be about
About how i promised i would never leave you but look at us now
So far apart i cant lean on you but i know i must carry on somehow
So what am i suppose to do when i still cant get over the past
Time was suppose to heal but i guess my pain is here to last...

Copyright © Nothingness ... [ 2006-06-04 19:13:36]
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Re: So much for time... (User Rating: 1 )
by bronzen on Sunday, 4th June 2006 @ 08:02:48 PM AEST
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honey time will heal all wounds and look to God in my younger years i felt the same but i cared only for my feeling and mental health that makes you strong no one should be weaken us

Re: So much for time... (User Rating: 1 )
by KarlaMarie on Sunday, 4th June 2006 @ 11:38:33 PM AEST
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When I was younger I had strong depression and because of that I attempted suicide a few times. I had thought of my partner at the time and your poem (the feelings behind it) is why I broke up with him I did not want him to feel as you do now, but thankfully I never succeeded in taking my life and I am still here today, I thank whatever kept me here.

As you where in such a situation with him it will be harder for you to move on then his friends. As he took his own life and you where in a close situation you would have thought he would have talked to you, correct. It would have been easier if he died of natural causes or an accident then his own hand, and I understand why that is.

But do not fret as one day you will feel whole again, time does heal all wounds but you need to live for the healing to start and then you will find one day you will be laughing at something that he once laughed at and you will feel all the better for it.

KarlaMarie

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