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Array ( [sid] => 121260 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fright Night Party Night [time] => 2006-06-04 11:50:53 [hometext] => This is was one of the scariest nights ever. Everything turned out fine, and I thank god for it. I tried to make you feel as intoxicated as I was this night, so you can understand the confusion [bodytext] => I breath fire for I am the dragon
The serpent, the master of the dimwitted poison
I drink whine for I am the king.
I am invincible and no one can stop me.
We opened a door to the floating, fleeting reality

.....The last man standing tonight keeps the crown.

But what is this whisper in my ear?
It gives my body chills, I feel it to my finger tips.
I'm stepping into a picture frame and going numb.
The voices in the room turn into the trombones from Charlie Brown's telephone
Stare aimlessly at the walls like Medusa
With a million snakes slithering through the holes I put in my brain.

....Just keep quiet. Don't let them know. It will pass.

The whisper is turning into screaming.
Screaming in my head so loud it pulls me down
Falling from the heavens in a vessel of vomit
Crashing to the ground, hypnotized by the eyes of ravens.
Maybe this time you won't get back up.

....Calm down. Say a little prayer.

The girl is tripping down the stairs
She just wants to drive home.
Give her the keys, she'll probably be alright.
Chicken Little just cut his own head off.
Cause this time the sky really IS falling down.

....you don't know her. Her friends will probably stop her, right?

Everyone is doing back flips
Because the police are circling the block.
Is this intimidation? Coincidence? Or parinoia?

...God no....It's finally taking over me.

JUST GET OUT OF MY HEAD! GET OUT OF MY HEAD!
I just want to wake up tomorow
And return to normality. I know I played too rough.
Momma aint gonna be happy

GET OUT OF MY HEAD! PLEASE GET OUT!




scream all you want, this night's getting a whole hell of a lot worse before it gets any better. Good job kid.
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Fright Night Party Night

Contributed by subgenius on Sunday, 4th June 2006 @ 11:50:53 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



I breath fire for I am the dragon
The serpent, the master of the dimwitted poison
I drink whine for I am the king.
I am invincible and no one can stop me.
We opened a door to the floating, fleeting reality

.....The last man standing tonight keeps the crown.

But what is this whisper in my ear?
It gives my body chills, I feel it to my finger tips.
I'm stepping into a picture frame and going numb.
The voices in the room turn into the trombones from Charlie Brown's telephone
Stare aimlessly at the walls like Medusa
With a million snakes slithering through the holes I put in my brain.

....Just keep quiet. Don't let them know. It will pass.

The whisper is turning into screaming.
Screaming in my head so loud it pulls me down
Falling from the heavens in a vessel of vomit
Crashing to the ground, hypnotized by the eyes of ravens.
Maybe this time you won't get back up.

....Calm down. Say a little prayer.

The girl is tripping down the stairs
She just wants to drive home.
Give her the keys, she'll probably be alright.
Chicken Little just cut his own head off.
Cause this time the sky really IS falling down.

....you don't know her. Her friends will probably stop her, right?

Everyone is doing back flips
Because the police are circling the block.
Is this intimidation? Coincidence? Or parinoia?

...God no....It's finally taking over me.

JUST GET OUT OF MY HEAD! GET OUT OF MY HEAD!
I just want to wake up tomorow
And return to normality. I know I played too rough.
Momma aint gonna be happy

GET OUT OF MY HEAD! PLEASE GET OUT!




scream all you want, this night's getting a whole hell of a lot worse before it gets any better. Good job kid.




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Re: Fright Night Party Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Lo2681 on Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 06:56:03 PM AEST
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Wow.I have been there once or twice in my life. and it is very very scarey. Well I am glad you made it out ok. Nice write. I felt like I was there as I read it. That's always a sign of talent:)

~Lo


Re: Fright Night Party Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 11:06:55 AM AEST
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That was a scary but excellent poem. I am happy that it all worked out in the end for you!!




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