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Array ( [sid] => 121232 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => LET'S CLOSE OUT [time] => 2006-06-03 21:08:15 [hometext] => THIS POEM IS ABOUT A YOUNG WOMAN WHO'S HUSBAND OR BOYFRIEND IS NOT HONEST ABOUT HIS FEELINGS [bodytext] => SEEMS TO ME YOUR DRIFTING AWAY WE'VE BEEN TOGETHER TOO MANY YEARS
WE'VE STRUGGLED AND BEEN THE IDEAL COUPLE IN THE EYES OF OUR PEERS

I DON'T KNOW WHAT'S GOING ON WE COULD ALWAYS READ EACH OTHER'S MIND
OUR FAVORITE PAST-TIME IS NOT SPECIAL ANYMORE IT SEEMS IT'S ALL DECLINED

I RAISED QUESTIONS ON WHAT YOUR FEELING BECAUSE YOUR BECOMING SO DISTANT
DO YOU CARE ABOUT RELATING IT OR DO I HAVE TO TO PIECE TOGETHER THE FRAGMENT

I DON'T WANT TO GO THERE CAN'T YOU SEE I DON'T WANT TO FIGURE THIS THING OUT FOR YOU
BE THE PERSON I KNOW YOU ARE AND BEGIN TO RELEASE IT BEGINNING WITH THE TRUTH

YOU'VE STOPPED GIVING ME THOSE JUST BECAUSE KISSES AND NO MORE PHONES CALLS FROM YOUR WORK
YOUR WAYS ARE GIVING ME SIGNS OF INFIDELITY AND MY HEART YOU WILL NOT JERK

I CALLED YOU TODAY JUST TO SAY HELLO TRYING TO PUT THIS FEELING BEHIND ME
BUT I FELT AS THOUGH I WAS BEING INTRUSIVE BECAUSE YOU RESPONDED SO BLANDLY

NOW YOU HAVE GIVEN ME THE WEAPONS TO TAKE MATTERS INTO MY OWN HANDS
I DARE NOT FEEL LIKE IT'S ME I SENSE YOU WANT TO CALL IT QUITS THE HURT I CAN WITHSTAND

I GAVE US A CHANCE TO TALK THIS SITUATION THROUGH I SEE YOU WANTED ME TO MAKE THE CALL
YOU DIDN'T WANT TO BE THE BAD GUY YOU WANT ME TO LOSE MY COOL SO YOU COULD SAY I WAS THE REASON FOR THE DOWNFALL

NO SWEETHEART YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND IT'S NOT GOING TO PLAY OUT LIKE THAT
I WILL CONTINUE TO BE YOUR GIRL AND WITH YOU CONTINUE MY DAILY FORMAT

SOON YOU WILL BECOME FED UP BECAUSE THE GUILT WILL BE TEARING AT YOUR SOUL
WORD OF ADVICE IT'S BETTER TO LET THE TRUTH UNFOLD

I CAN DEAL WITH IT BECAUSE I SEE WHAT'S GOING ON YOUR FACE SHOWS SO MUCH DISCONTENT
I AM NOT IN THE DARK THIS REALATIONSHIP YOU'VE ALREADY PUT IN A DENT

YOU HAVEN'T CAME UP WITH ANY SOLUTIONS ON HOW TO WALK OUT OF MY LIFE
YOU HAVE NOTHING SUBSTANTIAL BECAUSE BETWEEN US WE HAVEN'T HAD ANY DAMAGING STRIFE

SO I SAY FACE ME AND TELL ME THAT YOU WANT TO BAIL-OUT
I DON'T CARE OF THE REASONS I JUST WANT YOU TO SAY IT HAVE A NICE LIFE AND LET'S CLOSE-OUT [comments] => 1 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 22 [informant] => BRONZEN [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
LET'S CLOSE OUT

Contributed by BRONZEN on Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 09:08:15 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



SEEMS TO ME YOUR DRIFTING AWAY WE'VE BEEN TOGETHER TOO MANY YEARS
WE'VE STRUGGLED AND BEEN THE IDEAL COUPLE IN THE EYES OF OUR PEERS

I DON'T KNOW WHAT'S GOING ON WE COULD ALWAYS READ EACH OTHER'S MIND
OUR FAVORITE PAST-TIME IS NOT SPECIAL ANYMORE IT SEEMS IT'S ALL DECLINED

I RAISED QUESTIONS ON WHAT YOUR FEELING BECAUSE YOUR BECOMING SO DISTANT
DO YOU CARE ABOUT RELATING IT OR DO I HAVE TO TO PIECE TOGETHER THE FRAGMENT

I DON'T WANT TO GO THERE CAN'T YOU SEE I DON'T WANT TO FIGURE THIS THING OUT FOR YOU
BE THE PERSON I KNOW YOU ARE AND BEGIN TO RELEASE IT BEGINNING WITH THE TRUTH

YOU'VE STOPPED GIVING ME THOSE JUST BECAUSE KISSES AND NO MORE PHONES CALLS FROM YOUR WORK
YOUR WAYS ARE GIVING ME SIGNS OF INFIDELITY AND MY HEART YOU WILL NOT JERK

I CALLED YOU TODAY JUST TO SAY HELLO TRYING TO PUT THIS FEELING BEHIND ME
BUT I FELT AS THOUGH I WAS BEING INTRUSIVE BECAUSE YOU RESPONDED SO BLANDLY

NOW YOU HAVE GIVEN ME THE WEAPONS TO TAKE MATTERS INTO MY OWN HANDS
I DARE NOT FEEL LIKE IT'S ME I SENSE YOU WANT TO CALL IT QUITS THE HURT I CAN WITHSTAND

I GAVE US A CHANCE TO TALK THIS SITUATION THROUGH I SEE YOU WANTED ME TO MAKE THE CALL
YOU DIDN'T WANT TO BE THE BAD GUY YOU WANT ME TO LOSE MY COOL SO YOU COULD SAY I WAS THE REASON FOR THE DOWNFALL

NO SWEETHEART YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND IT'S NOT GOING TO PLAY OUT LIKE THAT
I WILL CONTINUE TO BE YOUR GIRL AND WITH YOU CONTINUE MY DAILY FORMAT

SOON YOU WILL BECOME FED UP BECAUSE THE GUILT WILL BE TEARING AT YOUR SOUL
WORD OF ADVICE IT'S BETTER TO LET THE TRUTH UNFOLD

I CAN DEAL WITH IT BECAUSE I SEE WHAT'S GOING ON YOUR FACE SHOWS SO MUCH DISCONTENT
I AM NOT IN THE DARK THIS REALATIONSHIP YOU'VE ALREADY PUT IN A DENT

YOU HAVEN'T CAME UP WITH ANY SOLUTIONS ON HOW TO WALK OUT OF MY LIFE
YOU HAVE NOTHING SUBSTANTIAL BECAUSE BETWEEN US WE HAVEN'T HAD ANY DAMAGING STRIFE

SO I SAY FACE ME AND TELL ME THAT YOU WANT TO BAIL-OUT
I DON'T CARE OF THE REASONS I JUST WANT YOU TO SAY IT HAVE A NICE LIFE AND LET'S CLOSE-OUT




Copyright © BRONZEN ... [ 2006-06-03 21:08:15]
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Re: LET'S CLOSE OUT (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmokin on Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 09:41:25 PM AEST
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The font made this one really difficult to read, i lost interest,, soz :-(




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