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Array ( [sid] => 121231 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My friend [time] => 2006-06-03 21:06:52 [hometext] => A friend should be with you after all is said and done, after all you together, have done [bodytext] => I wrote this thinking about, in all honesty, Severus Snape and Lucius Malfoy, and their friendship and how it is portrayed in alot of fanfiction.

Imprisoned in our own lives
Can never start again
Wipe the slate clean
Just you and me my friend

Forever bound by mistakes
Our past selves made
Looked upon unwisely
Our soul forever jade

Taken by our greed
We watched for that ungodly hour
And set the devil free
In our bid for power

Tortured and broken
Results of our blood lust
The multitudes of dead
We did what we thought we must

Now when I look back I ask
Was the soul I sold
Worth the power and fame
Was it worth the worlds gold

I ask for no excuses
For I know what I did was wrong
But would I do it all again
Now that all is said and done

Perhaps I still would
One can never tell
Yet no matter what I do now
I know my friend you will be there as well

KarlaMarie
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 16 [informant] => KarlaMarie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
My friend

Contributed by KarlaMarie on Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 09:06:52 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



I wrote this thinking about, in all honesty, Severus Snape and Lucius Malfoy, and their friendship and how it is portrayed in alot of fanfiction.

Imprisoned in our own lives
Can never start again
Wipe the slate clean
Just you and me my friend

Forever bound by mistakes
Our past selves made
Looked upon unwisely
Our soul forever jade

Taken by our greed
We watched for that ungodly hour
And set the devil free
In our bid for power

Tortured and broken
Results of our blood lust
The multitudes of dead
We did what we thought we must

Now when I look back I ask
Was the soul I sold
Worth the power and fame
Was it worth the worlds gold

I ask for no excuses
For I know what I did was wrong
But would I do it all again
Now that all is said and done

Perhaps I still would
One can never tell
Yet no matter what I do now
I know my friend you will be there as well

KarlaMarie




Copyright © KarlaMarie ... [ 2006-06-03 21:06:52]
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Re: My friend (User Rating: 1 )
by bronzen on Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 09:14:32 PM AEST
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VERY NICE POEM
I NEVER HAD BEST FRIENDS
BUT I THINK WRITE IS
A GOOD DEDICATION


Re: My friend (User Rating: 1 )
by mali on Sunday, 4th June 2006 @ 12:19:42 AM AEST
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well written, very nice


Re: My friend (User Rating: 1 )
by JGB on Sunday, 4th June 2006 @ 03:55:38 AM AEST
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I love this!

It reminds me of my friend and my brother...

Great Write!!!

Joanna


Re: My friend (User Rating: 1 )
by ham323 on Sunday, 4th June 2006 @ 06:42:24 AM AEST
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0o0o0o0o0o0o. This is like uberfantastic!
I like your rhyming and they way it's said it makes me want to say it with an accent. Hah. Well good work. *Five stars*




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