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Array ( [sid] => 121181 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Nothing Else Matters [time] => 2006-06-02 18:56:38 [hometext] => I know I write a lot of poetry about lost love, but it is from my life. This one is inspired from Metallica's 'Nothing Else Matters' [bodytext] => Without your love,
Without your touch,
What is to live for?

Nothing.

Nothing else matters,
All I live for,
Is you.
All I care for,
Is you.

I am nothing without you,
So please don't leave me.

Nothing.

Leave if you wish,
I will not stop you.
But know this,
I am nothing
Without you.

So please stay here,
We will be happy.

Nothing.

I've laid my soul bare,
But you go ahead and
Leave.
You will never see me again.

Without you,
Nothing else matters,
Nothing at all.

Nothing Else Matters.

I now go to kill myself,
Now I go to die.
Do not cry for me,
Don't you dare.

Without your love,
I'm not a man,
So now I depart.
Goodbye.

Nothing Else Matters. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 32 [informant] => EddieDean [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Nothing Else Matters

Contributed by EddieDean on Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 06:56:38 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Without your love,
Without your touch,
What is to live for?

Nothing.

Nothing else matters,
All I live for,
Is you.
All I care for,
Is you.

I am nothing without you,
So please don't leave me.

Nothing.

Leave if you wish,
I will not stop you.
But know this,
I am nothing
Without you.

So please stay here,
We will be happy.

Nothing.

I've laid my soul bare,
But you go ahead and
Leave.
You will never see me again.

Without you,
Nothing else matters,
Nothing at all.

Nothing Else Matters.

I now go to kill myself,
Now I go to die.
Do not cry for me,
Don't you dare.

Without your love,
I'm not a man,
So now I depart.
Goodbye.

Nothing Else Matters.

Copyright © EddieDean ... [ 2006-06-02 18:56:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Nothing Else Matters (User Rating: 1 )
by PoeticHybrid on Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 05:29:59 AM AEST
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I like the repeating lines, they help deliver the final message well.

Re: Nothing Else Matters (User Rating: 1 )
by Sony_Boat on Sunday, 4th June 2006 @ 02:00:29 PM AEST
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Yes it is sad, nice conversational piece however. Keep writing, very enjoyable to read. Stay alive, keep sharing your heart, it matters.

Re: Nothing Else Matters (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 11:07:40 PM AEST
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Love is very strong.. this poem shows your heart is strong with love.. it is very sentimental.. if you do decide to go.. keep that love going inside of you... God always has something stored up for us... this poem has a lot.. a lot.. a lot of feeling in it.. I feel the heart crying out...the only giving up you need to do, is to give up that love.. and if you do, be very careful with it.. place it respectfully in a safe place..

Hugs,

RaquelLeah

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