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Array ( [sid] => 121168 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I am... [time] => 2006-06-02 14:08:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => i am the fire in your heart
the hatred in your eyes
the drug that you take
the sex in your mind
you need to feed your addiction
and nothing else
because it takes away the pain you feel
do you know what i mean?
the anger wraps around my neck like a noose
it takes me over and over again
i cant speak because im suffocating
it grabs me by the throat and beats me
and after i wait for it until it sleeps
i try to stay away form the light
but it pulls me toward it
i struggle to stay away
when you look at the needle do you feel it running through your viens already.....just know that it wont last forever
i am the fire in your heart
the hatred in your eyes
the drug that you take
the sex in your mind..

thank you,

David [comments] => 3 [counter] => 303 [topic] => 66 [informant] => ROCKSTAR [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )

I am...

Contributed by ROCKSTAR on Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 02:08:00 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

i am the fire in your heart
the hatred in your eyes
the drug that you take
the sex in your mind
you need to feed your addiction
and nothing else
because it takes away the pain you feel
do you know what i mean?
the anger wraps around my neck like a noose
it takes me over and over again
i cant speak because im suffocating
it grabs me by the throat and beats me
and after i wait for it until it sleeps
i try to stay away form the light
but it pulls me toward it
i struggle to stay away
when you look at the needle do you feel it running through your viens already.....just know that it wont last forever
i am the fire in your heart
the hatred in your eyes
the drug that you take
the sex in your mind..

thank you,

David

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Re: I am... (User Rating: 1 )
by GurlyTye on Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 05:27:39 PM AEST
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intense....

Re: I am... (User Rating: 1 )
by kellog on Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 04:40:35 PM AEST
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wow.. felt as though I was a part of this..
great, great write

Re: I am... (User Rating: 1 )
by wrdz on Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 07:56:30 PM AEST
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The true intensity of drugs is unexplainable. It may be different for each person, but the intensity level is so maximized that it can never be described by anyone who has ever experienced using drugs. In my files, I have a piece (two actually) called I Am and a second one called A Likable Enemy To Some. Both are drugs speaking truthfully about itself. I tried to put myself in the place of drugs to give drugs a "voice". These two pieces are the end result. I hope you will have a look and let me know what you think. Thank you for sharing your exquisite piece. A very well done to you for your efforts. I applaud you, sir.

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