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Array ( [sid] => 121047 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => activated eyes [time] => 2006-05-31 02:18:37 [hometext] => kyra i love you please comment someone [bodytext] => footsteps patterns
mercury satun
poison pain
eyes with tears again
body pure and still i hurt
yet everyday i stay alert
not crossing right and avoiding fights
and still i have not seen the light
my emotion is wrong
and yet so was the bong i seek forfor something to make me feel
i see for something to make me real
in the distance i see a figure
and
as i walk nearer it grows bigger
standing there with crimson red hair and bright blue eyes
her eyeliner runs with the tears that she cries
and in my soul i know this is right
could this figure be my light
the compassion in her heart stings like a dart
and the depth of her eyes
could tell no lies
she is my world an omnimus light
with out her im nothing
eyes in the night
i take her hand and walk away
she is my reason for breath today
she is jesus my savior
my life and behvior
all my wrongs she can right
my day and my night
she is my fingers to toes
and in darkness she glows
she can say anything and i know it is true
kyra if your reading
this person is you
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 278 [topic] => 2 [informant] => shasay [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
activated eyes

Contributed by shasay on Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 02:18:37 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



footsteps patterns
mercury satun
poison pain
eyes with tears again
body pure and still i hurt
yet everyday i stay alert
not crossing right and avoiding fights
and still i have not seen the light
my emotion is wrong
and yet so was the bong i seek forfor something to make me feel
i see for something to make me real
in the distance i see a figure
and
as i walk nearer it grows bigger
standing there with crimson red hair and bright blue eyes
her eyeliner runs with the tears that she cries
and in my soul i know this is right
could this figure be my light
the compassion in her heart stings like a dart
and the depth of her eyes
could tell no lies
she is my world an omnimus light
with out her im nothing
eyes in the night
i take her hand and walk away
she is my reason for breath today
she is jesus my savior
my life and behvior
all my wrongs she can right
my day and my night
she is my fingers to toes
and in darkness she glows
she can say anything and i know it is true
kyra if your reading
this person is you




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Re: activated eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 05:38:35 AM AEST
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A beautiful love note indeed; with sweet rhymed verse that can win a heart.
FRANCO


Re: activated eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Davinah on Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 09:04:31 AM AEST
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Very beautiful!




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