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Array ( [sid] => 120986 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => why daddy why? [time] => 2006-05-30 00:02:15 [hometext] => i would say men are the hideous thing/people god ever made, and i am sorry fellas but its just awful to do our ladies wrong. [bodytext] => as I sit up all night

tears rolling down my eyes

cant sleep, cant stop I gotta cry

its not right, its awful, so hideous

I cant live no more I rather die






it was inhuman it was just insane

I just dont get it, why why why,

how can a father do something like this?

to his own child, what a ***** pig





its mid night and I only wanted to say good night

walked out to kiss him on my nigh ties thinking I would be aight

here we are a hand down my pants and a friend help too

I scream out loud hoping it will make all go right




the evil cared less and kept on quite alright

he did all wrong for so long, the I was hopeless;

I struggle so much I was so restless

he repeatedly raped me each and every night




I begged and begged for mercy and to be left alone

but what else can I do when everything I had is all gone

I lost my virginity to my own father and friends





its another night for him to come by and do it again

not only just him, he invited his friends

am so sacre I was so hurt I was in pain,

blood sobbing down my legs hoping he

will realize it and bring it all to an end





but the evil in him kept pushing for more

slapping me around and calling me a whore

why why why why why daddy why ?

you made me do it and you kept asking for more




I pleaded again and again and said I love you

he blind folded me and put me in the trunk

he was so fearful thinking he might get *****

if the I open my mouth, and tell them cops





here they are heading for the woods

took me out and had their last

pleading over and over again please please

tearlessly I cy out hoping it would help

I went on again and pleaded. please daddy please daddy




daddy please stop, I love you I love you, you are my best

he went back into the car and reached in for the bat

I scream and scream and told him I wont say a thing

please daddy I wont I swear I wont daddy please I wont do a thing

powerlessly I try to fight back but it was not a thing

suddenly I stop breathing, not saying a thing

and daddy is now off of me yelling, and smiling, and said

thats what you get ***** for being a whore

here i am, am dead.



if you are against rape and child abuse please copy and repost it on myspace buleting board thank you for the supprot. for the men you can ***** off my blog page now cause thats not really fare
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why daddy why?

Contributed by jmakuer on Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 12:02:15 AM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse



as I sit up all night

tears rolling down my eyes

cant sleep, cant stop I gotta cry

its not right, its awful, so hideous

I cant live no more I rather die






it was inhuman it was just insane

I just dont get it, why why why,

how can a father do something like this?

to his own child, what a ***** pig





its mid night and I only wanted to say good night

walked out to kiss him on my nigh ties thinking I would be aight

here we are a hand down my pants and a friend help too

I scream out loud hoping it will make all go right




the evil cared less and kept on quite alright

he did all wrong for so long, the I was hopeless;

I struggle so much I was so restless

he repeatedly raped me each and every night




I begged and begged for mercy and to be left alone

but what else can I do when everything I had is all gone

I lost my virginity to my own father and friends





its another night for him to come by and do it again

not only just him, he invited his friends

am so sacre I was so hurt I was in pain,

blood sobbing down my legs hoping he

will realize it and bring it all to an end





but the evil in him kept pushing for more

slapping me around and calling me a whore

why why why why why daddy why ?

you made me do it and you kept asking for more




I pleaded again and again and said I love you

he blind folded me and put me in the trunk

he was so fearful thinking he might get *****

if the I open my mouth, and tell them cops





here they are heading for the woods

took me out and had their last

pleading over and over again please please

tearlessly I cy out hoping it would help

I went on again and pleaded. please daddy please daddy




daddy please stop, I love you I love you, you are my best

he went back into the car and reached in for the bat

I scream and scream and told him I wont say a thing

please daddy I wont I swear I wont daddy please I wont do a thing

powerlessly I try to fight back but it was not a thing

suddenly I stop breathing, not saying a thing

and daddy is now off of me yelling, and smiling, and said

thats what you get ***** for being a whore

here i am, am dead.



if you are against rape and child abuse please copy and repost it on myspace buleting board thank you for the supprot. for the men you can ***** off my blog page now cause thats not really fare




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Re: why daddy why? (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 12:18:33 AM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
I don't hate men but was molested by an uncle as a child. I know how it devastates tho and a person will never forget it.
Keep up the great writing.
I see u r milatary in Irac.
God bless you and keep you safe in his arms.
Thank you for what you do in the milatary etc.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy


Re: why daddy why? (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 01:02:54 AM AEST
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This isn't men, this is insane and twisted that is to blame here. There's really no connection between the author's note and the piece, and it's straining the limits of a family website, that's for certain.

I agree with this completely, don't get me wrong, but I'm not liking its presentation. There are plenty of honorable men out there, of which I try very hard to be one.

Andrew


Re: why daddy why? (User Rating: 1 )
by Davinah on Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 04:10:56 AM AEST
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Very intense write... I would be careful generalizing though... Not all men are demons and not all women are angels.


Re: why daddy why? (User Rating: 1 )
by vitamin_joe on Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 09:29:41 AM AEST
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I am with Andrew. I am not really sure I like this one, and yr comments before and after are full of hate.

on the level of poetry, this starts out as if it is true, but then at the end I realised it was a fiction, as you couldn't be writing it and and be dead. I felt a bit cheated by that, somehow.

technically, lots of typos and grammar problems.

I think the subject needs addressing tho, so well done for having a go. I am not sure you will get far saying things like "men are the hideous thing/people god ever made" though. that's just not true- it's yr opinion. I am sorry you feel that way.
vitamin joe


Re: why daddy why? (User Rating: 1 )
by Remi on Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 09:33:26 AM AEST
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very raw and emotoinal write great job
i would love for all my friends to read this and i will show it to them if you don't mine




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