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Array ( [sid] => 12098 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Please Just understand [time] => 2003-02-07 06:00:00 [hometext] => When our words go not understood they wiegh us down...smother us...everyone needs a little understanding in life...i know i do.... [bodytext] => My prayers
go unspoken
afraid
my prayers
will go unheard
i felt God once
in a midnight's dream
He swallowed me
took away my pain
i never felt ashamed
free i was indeed
i felt God once
Sweet air i breathed
everything was a comfort to me
parents. always there
know everything, they cared
but now they scream and yell
i'm living in a firey hell
every smell is a stench
that burns my lungs
Now i'm ashamed of it all
depression, heartbreak,
my life i'd take
but it must get better
to you i write this letter
i felft God once
But his eyes have turned away
A simple hug i crave
They read my words
but they don't feel thier pain
no one can grasp
while for life's air i gasp
sufficating me
please
one more breath
understand
so i
can
b r e a t h e. . . . [comments] => 3 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Snugglebear [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Please Just understand

Contributed by Snugglebear on Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

My prayers
go unspoken
afraid
my prayers
will go unheard
i felt God once
in a midnight's dream
He swallowed me
took away my pain
i never felt ashamed
free i was indeed
i felt God once
Sweet air i breathed
everything was a comfort to me
parents. always there
know everything, they cared
but now they scream and yell
i'm living in a firey hell
every smell is a stench
that burns my lungs
Now i'm ashamed of it all
depression, heartbreak,
my life i'd take
but it must get better
to you i write this letter
i felft God once
But his eyes have turned away
A simple hug i crave
They read my words
but they don't feel thier pain
no one can grasp
while for life's air i gasp
sufficating me
please
one more breath
understand
so i
can
b r e a t h e. . . .

Copyright © Snugglebear ... [ 2003-02-07 06:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Please Just understand (User Rating: 1 )
by Cici on Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 01:03:50 PM AEST
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This is an excellent poem. I feel your pain. I look forward to reading more of your poems.
Keep up the writing

Claire

Re: Please Just understand (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 04:39:54 PM AEST
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this is so, so good...and so true...wow...

Re: Please Just understand (User Rating: 1 )
by steamsaint on Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 10:12:33 PM AEST
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great poem i feel your pain

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