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Array ( [sid] => 12097 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The silence of the sun. [time] => 2003-02-07 05:30:00 [hometext] => Just thinking about that spring day I'm so longing for! [bodytext] => Silence from the morning sun,
the beauty that it holds,
The fresh new day has just begun,
forming into Gods molds,
Smelling of the fresh air,
breathing it all inside,
looking to the skies without care,
taking life in stride,
feeling the warmth on my face,
wishing it will last,
the beauty is hard to erase,
but disapears fast,
birds chirping indelight,
I close my eyes to hear,
the silence than turns into night,
the beauty I see is clear,
silence from the wind I feel,
silence from the beautiful scene,
knowing this is all for real,
and not one of my dreams!

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The silence of the sun.

Contributed by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 05:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty

Silence from the morning sun,
the beauty that it holds,
The fresh new day has just begun,
forming into Gods molds,
Smelling of the fresh air,
breathing it all inside,
looking to the skies without care,
taking life in stride,
feeling the warmth on my face,
wishing it will last,
the beauty is hard to erase,
but disapears fast,
birds chirping indelight,
I close my eyes to hear,
the silence than turns into night,
the beauty I see is clear,
silence from the wind I feel,
silence from the beautiful scene,
knowing this is all for real,
and not one of my dreams!

Copyright © LOWMAN613 ... [ 2003-02-07 05:30:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The silence of the sun. (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 08:06:15 AM AEST
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ohh i love this, it has become one of my favorites of yours, very lovely, huggs nessa

Re: The silence of the sun. (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanna on Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 08:29:31 AM AEST
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Winter is sure dragging its feet, eh? Spring cant come fast enough! I like this poem, brings out everything I miss about Spring.

Re: The silence of the sun. (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 10:19:17 AM AEST
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beautifully worded, I wish it was spring to, warm and cozy, I hate being cold in the winter, thanks for this great write

Re: The silence of the sun. (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 04:45:26 AM AEST
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Love this write of yours, and think it's my favourite so far. Lovely images and flows so beautifully.

Re: The silence of the sun. (User Rating: 1 )
by Robert_Edgar_Burns on Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 03:42:51 PM AEST
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Yes, even I am waiting for that day And I live in Florida!! Beautiful warms feelings on a cold
and dreary day! Loved it.
Love,
Robert Edgar Burns

Re: The silence of the sun. (User Rating: 1 )
by riverofwords on Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 08:15:41 AM AEST
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great read ,great imagery

well done

peace be you journey

Terry

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