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You betrayed a love that was so true.
I've never layed eyes on anyone else.
All you think of is your freaking self.
I'm tired of all your little games.
I don't want to hear another girl's name.
I don't want to blame myself anymore.
It's either me or your little whore.
I'm not going to live my life this way.
When I question you never have much to say.
You need to grow up and open your eyes.
Without any trust love only dies. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 394 [topic] => 6 [informant] => jujubee21 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Betrayal

Contributed by jujubee21 on Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 08:49:40 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I guess I'm not good enough for you.
You betrayed a love that was so true.
I've never layed eyes on anyone else.
All you think of is your freaking self.
I'm tired of all your little games.
I don't want to hear another girl's name.
I don't want to blame myself anymore.
It's either me or your little whore.
I'm not going to live my life this way.
When I question you never have much to say.
You need to grow up and open your eyes.
Without any trust love only dies.

Copyright © jujubee21 ... [ 2006-05-29 08:49:40]
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Re: Betrayal (User Rating: 1 )
by chaos78 on Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 10:48:22 AM AEST
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u are so right without trust love can only die good write

Re: Betrayal (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 06:24:00 PM AEST
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Great writing.
Hang tuff.
Keep the faith and move on.
luv, huggs,
emy`

Re: Betrayal (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 07:09:24 PM AEST
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Wow! This was anger well expressed in "let's not mince words" fashion coherently laid out in beautiful rhyme and a meter 'n' syntax that made it flow with fed up 'bout waitin' for some growin' up! Very good and enjoyable write!

wabl
KenMoore
cowboy

Re: Betrayal (User Rating: 1 )
by spazz911 on Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 09:15:33 AM AEST
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you are so right about the value of trust and love
kc
amazing write

Re: Betrayal (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 09:20:26 AM AEST
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Strong feelings, true message. Still, I shake my head when good-hearted girls still try and bargain with loser guys (eg its her or me-you know, the one you married and have 4 kids with?). I guess its part of the female psyche, but I thinks its a socialised trait. That aside, men also hate hearing their girl talk about other guys.Now, that's primal.

Spike

Re: Betrayal (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 10:26:29 AM AEST
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I am glad that you realize that you don't have to take anyone else's crap.. Whatever makes you happy you should do.. Powerful emotion.. Great poem..

Take care
christina

Re: Betrayal (User Rating: 1 )
by texasw97 on Thursday, 8th May 2008 @ 05:00:02 PM AEST
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This was aight..You have better ones..But I feel you on just getting this off your chest. Take care

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