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Array ( [sid] => 120882 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Why Can't You See [time] => 2006-05-27 21:13:47 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm almost over the edge and you keep pushing me farther away.
I'm not strong enough to push you back, so I take it everyday.
I don't know what goes on inside you head, or how you make it okay.
But one day I will find my strength, the strengh I need to push you away.
You took my intamacy and shared it with more than one other.
Just left me at home to sit and wonder.
I know this isn't right for me, but I don't know what to do.
You don't know how much it hurts not being able to trust you.
You act like my feelings don't matter at all.
Everytime I think I'm done, again you make me fall.
I deserve for somone to be so good to me
I know that, but why can't you see. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 75 [informant] => jujubee21 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

Why Can't You See

Contributed by jujubee21 on Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 09:13:47 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

I'm almost over the edge and you keep pushing me farther away.
I'm not strong enough to push you back, so I take it everyday.
I don't know what goes on inside you head, or how you make it okay.
But one day I will find my strength, the strengh I need to push you away.
You took my intamacy and shared it with more than one other.
Just left me at home to sit and wonder.
I know this isn't right for me, but I don't know what to do.
You don't know how much it hurts not being able to trust you.
You act like my feelings don't matter at all.
Everytime I think I'm done, again you make me fall.
I deserve for somone to be so good to me
I know that, but why can't you see.

Copyright © jujubee21 ... [ 2006-05-27 21:13:47]
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Re: Why Can't You See (User Rating: 1 )
by MarLites on Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 12:27:54 AM AEST
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I can feel your pain in this writing very good.
I wonder why meself.
Mary

Re: Why Can't You See (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 03:01:35 PM AEST
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good rhyme and your feeling came through, I felt your anguish.

Re: Why Can't You See (User Rating: 1 )
by Elite on Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 08:56:27 AM AEST
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this is written to so - such a great expression of what must have been going inside you...i can really feel wot it must be/have been like

Re: Why Can't You See (User Rating: 1 )
by texasw97 on Thursday, 8th May 2008 @ 04:46:51 PM AEST
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I like this poem. I feel you. I sometimes do the one thing fhat your poem is about. I guess that's why I'm unhappy right now. Because I did that crap six years ago. Now I regret it. I hope all is well with you now though. Take care

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