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Array ( [sid] => 120880 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => He Says....( he thinks) [time] => 2006-05-27 20:40:05 [hometext] => Just playing around...lol [bodytext] =>
My trust for you
is endless
and eternal

( Wouldn't believe you if you said the grass was green)

You are sweeter
than a rare
and fragrant nectar

( For a woman who is calloused, cold and mean)

You have breathed
unto my soul
and I am weakened

( more than likely 'cause your breath is rank and stale)

And your face
shines as the Harvest
Moon of Autumn

( rather lifeless , pocked with holes and kinda pale)

[comments] => 6 [counter] => 266 [topic] => 25 [informant] => Rakerman1999 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

He Says....( he thinks)

Contributed by Rakerman1999 on Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 08:40:05 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

My trust for you
is endless
and eternal

( Wouldn't believe you if you said the grass was green)

You are sweeter
than a rare
and fragrant nectar

( For a woman who is calloused, cold and mean)

You have breathed
unto my soul
and I am weakened

( more than likely 'cause your breath is rank and stale)

And your face
shines as the Harvest
Moon of Autumn

( rather lifeless , pocked with holes and kinda pale)

Copyright © Rakerman1999 ... [ 2006-05-27 20:40:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: He Says....( he thinks) (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 08:46:43 PM AEST
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This is really clever..I loved the last part.. can I do a "she said"
.........???

Re: He Says....( he thinks) (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 11:24:45 PM AEST
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Clever & interesting never read anything like this ! I liked it! Great job. Christina

Re: He Says....( he thinks) (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 08:52:12 AM AEST
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Don't worry Larry, we all need to vent. Different from what I've read of yours before, but I for one am glad that you're digging into different parts of your psychological and emotional repetoire, beyond your flawless and smooth cornered love poetry.

Spike

p.s. it is funny! reminds me of those cartoons in Mad magazine, where people are saying and doing things but their shadows are showing the true story.

Re: He Says....( he thinks) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 05:41:30 PM AEST
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Larry~

Well I hope by the author's note that you meant this in a lighthearted fun
kind of fashion . . . on accounta it had me chuckling to myself. [and
nodding in a "oh boy do I know what you mean!" sorta way]

Excellent conception of thought here, Larry. Incredibly done!!

~Breezy

Re: He Says....( he thinks) (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 07:29:46 PM AEST
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Great write...Kinda funny in a way..
I enjoyed reading it.
God Bless!
C.S

Re: He Says....( he thinks) (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 02:09:06 PM AEST
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roflmao!!! too cute!!

love n' hugs nessa

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