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Array ( [sid] => 120858 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => YELL AT ME [time] => 2006-05-27 12:12:12 [hometext] => this should go with child abuse [bodytext] => Just yell at me
it's not like I care
I can't be perfect
because life isn't fair
I'll collapse in pain
lying on the ground
you'll whip because I seem so proud
I almost look forward to the beating I'll get
maybe I'll cry
and you will regret
but I had to expect this
as blood's shed on the floor
now that I'm dead
it won't hurt anymore. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Forgotten_soul [notes] => (Edited for spelling by Mod_11 ) [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

YELL AT ME

Contributed by Forgotten_soul on Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 12:12:12 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Just yell at me
it's not like I care
I can't be perfect
because life isn't fair
I'll collapse in pain
lying on the ground
you'll whip because I seem so proud
I almost look forward to the beating I'll get
maybe I'll cry
and you will regret
but I had to expect this
as blood's shed on the floor
now that I'm dead
it won't hurt anymore.

Copyright © Forgotten_soul ... [ 2006-05-27 12:12:12]
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Re: YELL AT ME (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 12:22:16 PM AEST
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And it's sad that situations like this seem to increase. The world should appreciate people like yourself who make us aware that this is a growing problem. Your words go straight to the heart.

Re: YELL AT ME (User Rating: 1 )
by zeequeen on Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 04:36:02 PM AEST
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wow.
So disturbing but true.
I hope this isn't a poem written from experience.

Re: YELL AT ME (User Rating: 1 )
by ham323 on Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 05:17:44 PM AEST
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Er.. Good poem. But sad.

Re: YELL AT ME (User Rating: 1 )
by spider on Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 08:41:21 AM AEST
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bloody hell.
i like poems like that. the ones that are over quickly but leave you feeling completely different.
thats really damn good.

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