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Array ( [sid] => 120850 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love sick fool [time] => 2006-05-27 09:57:34 [hometext] => Please read, comment, and enjoy!(note:when i say [bodytext] => Im ready to drool
for im a love sick fool
I draw pictures of you and write poems too
Because the only thing on my mind is you
When im not with you i miss you
And when i am with you i want to kiss you
i talk about you so much
and now that school is out i miss hanging with you at lunch
You are everything to me
and when im with you i feel free
This sounds gay and corny too
but there is nothing more that i want than you
It makes me happy to see you smile
And for that smile id walk a million miles
Its kinda creepy that im obsessed with you
but im obsessed because i love everything that is you
Its hard to write down my feelings and rhyme
especially because i drift off and think you when im trying to use my mind
I will end this poem now to say there is not a minute that i dont think of you each and every day
Im ready to drool
for im a love sick fool [comments] => 2 [counter] => 254 [topic] => 76 [informant] => death_not_be_feared [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => obsession )

Love sick fool

Contributed by death_not_be_feared on Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 09:57:34 AM in AEST
Topic: obsession

Im ready to drool
for im a love sick fool
I draw pictures of you and write poems too
Because the only thing on my mind is you
When im not with you i miss you
And when i am with you i want to kiss you
i talk about you so much
and now that school is out i miss hanging with you at lunch
You are everything to me
and when im with you i feel free
This sounds gay and corny too
but there is nothing more that i want than you
It makes me happy to see you smile
And for that smile id walk a million miles
Its kinda creepy that im obsessed with you
but im obsessed because i love everything that is you
Its hard to write down my feelings and rhyme
especially because i drift off and think you when im trying to use my mind
I will end this poem now to say there is not a minute that i dont think of you each and every day
Im ready to drool
for im a love sick fool

Copyright © death_not_be_feared ... [ 2006-05-27 09:57:34]
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Re: Love sick fool (User Rating: 1 )
by joydeep_nath on Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 10:06:18 AM AEST
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hey this is actually good..however corny it may b..moslty how it dwells on the moment..good work

Re: Love sick fool (User Rating: 1 )
by MarLites on Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 10:34:43 AM AEST
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Yes I know exactly how you feel. Loved the poem and your name.
Mary

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