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Array ( [sid] => 120795 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => WAS SCREAMIN [time] => 2006-05-26 07:43:04 [hometext] => My somewhat ex jus rantin [bodytext] => Yo luv isn't real
"cause You can't feel.
Been there before.
ain't sleepin round, no mo!

He say you so tuff.
Was screamin, God, please
don;t let me get aides,
Oh god! My soul's rage
Was scremin ,
Please God, no aides!

He was sleepin round see
he didn't care 'bout me.
Oh yeah he confessed
God revealed the rest.

So many times dear fatha
We stumble-n-bobble.
Stay there if ya want.
Your nite marees will haunt.

Tuffness, hell it ain't me
Tis God's luv, my pilot, see?
Leaving you with forgiveness.
ln God be blessed.

In Jesus name, amen!

...The Promise...

SultryRose's Signatures

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WAS SCREAMIN

Contributed by emystar on Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 07:43:04 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Yo luv isn't real
"cause You can't feel.
Been there before.
ain't sleepin round, no mo!

He say you so tuff.
Was screamin, God, please
don;t let me get aides,
Oh god! My soul's rage
Was scremin ,
Please God, no aides!

He was sleepin round see
he didn't care 'bout me.
Oh yeah he confessed
God revealed the rest.

So many times dear fatha
We stumble-n-bobble.
Stay there if ya want.
Your nite marees will haunt.

Tuffness, hell it ain't me
Tis God's luv, my pilot, see?
Leaving you with forgiveness.
ln God be blessed.

In Jesus name, amen!

...The Promise...

SultryRose's Signatures

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2006-05-26 07:43:04]
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Re: WAS SCREAMIN (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 07:55:05 AM AEST
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It will make a nice RAP, nicely done.

sadaddy

Re: WAS SCREAMIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 05:43:23 PM AEST
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Wow i am impress with this song .
great job on this.

hugs

Re: WAS SCREAMIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 09:51:37 PM AEST
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A very lovely and most well crafted song emy

lots of passion behind the lyrics. Nicely done

my friend.

((((emystar))))

Ben

Re: WAS SCREAMIN (User Rating: 1 )
by JGB on Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 03:20:23 AM AEST
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I may not be into rap, but I Love this em!!!

LOL!!! I FEEL YOU!!!!

Joanna

Re: WAS SCREAMIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 11:26:15 PM AEST
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These are some really nice lyrics you have written. I enjoyed reading, and it was fun to read the words in the way you wrote them.

Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem as well. My first reader, yahoooooo...and my new found friend.

Pepper

Re: WAS SCREAMIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 12:10:24 AM AEST
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Great work Emy~..and how nobel.. your forgiveness-

B

Re: WAS SCREAMIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 12:20:53 AM AEST
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Amazing write, Emy.... was almost singing while reading it...
Hugs
Jenni

Re: WAS SCREAMIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 09:19:33 AM AEST
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Incredible Emy. This piece, and your heart.

Wonderfully penned lyrics. [I heard a funky beat whilst reading . .. lol]

*hugs*
~Breezy

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