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Array ( [sid] => 120794 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Keep it [time] => 2006-05-26 07:30:00 [hometext] => God, I hate people sometimes [bodytext] => Keep it comming sugar,
Keep the freshness locked in
With your vapour sealed insides
Your vacuum packed asides

Keep it hot girl,
Keep your secrets locked in tight
With your tabloid titillation
With your lack of inhabitations

Keep it stupid, simple.
Keep this culture going
With this lack of actual thought.
With the Mercedes you just bought

Keep it all in line.
Neat and side by side, X and Y
With the answer on the line
Just sign the dotted line.
[comments] => 7 [counter] => 280 [topic] => 6 [informant] => franko [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Keep it

Contributed by franko on Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 07:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Keep it comming sugar,
Keep the freshness locked in
With your vapour sealed insides
Your vacuum packed asides

Keep it hot girl,
Keep your secrets locked in tight
With your tabloid titillation
With your lack of inhabitations

Keep it stupid, simple.
Keep this culture going
With this lack of actual thought.
With the Mercedes you just bought

Keep it all in line.
Neat and side by side, X and Y
With the answer on the line
Just sign the dotted line.

Copyright © franko ... [ 2006-05-26 07:30:00]
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Re: Keep it (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 07:49:06 AM AEST
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Huhuh, I heah ya.
Very good write.
huggs,
emy

Re: Keep it (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 07:51:39 AM AEST
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The poet here has expressed the emotions and frustration very beautifully, we could sense the cooker hot and steaming.
FRANCO

Re: Keep it (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 08:09:34 AM AEST
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Nope, No Emotions here, LOL

sadaddy

Re: Keep it (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 08:11:01 AM AEST
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interesting write.

wizard

Re: Keep it (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 09:49:36 AM AEST
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No emotions, no passions,- folks without them are deprived of what nourishes the soul for growth. hey suffer "Atrophy" Pity them!

Beautifully and very aptly brought to the fore in this excellent poem.

Elizabeth

Re: Keep it (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 02:54:11 PM AEST
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"keep this culture going"...I liked this line..it says a lot.

Re: Keep it (User Rating: 1 )
by seci on Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 04:48:29 PM AEST
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i really like this because it is diffrent. i really really do.

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