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Array ( [sid] => 120743 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ode to the Unfeeling [time] => 2006-05-25 14:43:48 [hometext] => The difference between friendship and love is but a fine line... I should have known that it would never work out, but, then again, even if I did, I'd never trade a single moment Jenna and I shared... not for anything in the world... [bodytext] =>
I remember…
The warmth of sunshine on a rainy day
The bliss that I felt when you came my way
The sheltered feeling that you’re here to stay

Because now…
My sun would not even shine anymore
I’m missing the bliss that I’ve longed for
Wanting to go to how things were before

If only…
I could change the weaving of destiny
Or stop the winds of change from flowing free
Then I’d be holding you right here with me

But then…
Dreams don’t really come true for everyone
Some have happy endings, while some have none
And I wake up to find my dream long gone

So now…
Only the pieces of my heart remain
Drenched in sorrow, soaked in tears, drowned in pain
Because I have loved and lost all in vain

Nevertheless…
You’re the only love I knew from the start
That even though fate tore our hearts apart
I’d still love you with what’s left of my heart

Until then…
I’d live to see each day without sunshine
And wither going against fate’s design
Loving you with this broken heart of mine
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 257 [topic] => 22 [informant] => ButchCorpuz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Ode to the Unfeeling

Contributed by ButchCorpuz on Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 02:43:48 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove




I remember…
The warmth of sunshine on a rainy day
The bliss that I felt when you came my way
The sheltered feeling that you’re here to stay

Because now…
My sun would not even shine anymore
I’m missing the bliss that I’ve longed for
Wanting to go to how things were before

If only…
I could change the weaving of destiny
Or stop the winds of change from flowing free
Then I’d be holding you right here with me

But then…
Dreams don’t really come true for everyone
Some have happy endings, while some have none
And I wake up to find my dream long gone

So now…
Only the pieces of my heart remain
Drenched in sorrow, soaked in tears, drowned in pain
Because I have loved and lost all in vain

Nevertheless…
You’re the only love I knew from the start
That even though fate tore our hearts apart
I’d still love you with what’s left of my heart

Until then…
I’d live to see each day without sunshine
And wither going against fate’s design
Loving you with this broken heart of mine




Copyright © ButchCorpuz ... [ 2006-05-25 14:43:48]
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Re: Ode to the Unfeeling (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 02:53:54 PM AEST
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Oh Butch, this is very painful to read, I can only imagine how painful it was to write. I'm sorry things didn't work out but you know what??... You'll always have those wonderful memories to which you can hold on.
Lovely write....as always..
Hugs
Jenni


Re: Ode to the Unfeeling (User Rating: 1 )
by MarLites on Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 07:17:41 PM AEST
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Oh my goodness! I just read your poem. A million times better than mine. I cried when I finished reading it. She should have seen what was rignt in front of her. Great Poem
Mary




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