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Array ( [sid] => 120729 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If we can share no love, is it worth the sun to come? [time] => 2006-05-25 09:31:10 [hometext] => Just something i have been working on i know its been a while since i have posted but please read,enjoy,and comment [bodytext] => Someone once said,and i almost cried,
"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides"
I never understood, for i only felt one side of the sun
I loved but was not loved back by my loved one
I never took seriously this silly little quote
But then one day i understood this quote is not a joke
All of the sudden it got so hot
I didnt know if i was dreaming or not
He wants me, he needs me, this new ray of sun
I love him and he loves me back my dreams now filled and done
I have another question still to ask
If the love ever stops does one ray of sun or both go back?
Once the sun is gone does it ever come back?
If not then all hearts would lifelessly crack
But also if the love is gone
No more feeling from my heart can be drawn
If we can share no love
Then is it worth the sun to come?
My how complicated is love! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 2 [informant] => death_not_be_feared [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
If we can share no love, is it worth the sun to come?

Contributed by death_not_be_feared on Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 09:31:10 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Someone once said,and i almost cried,
"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides"
I never understood, for i only felt one side of the sun
I loved but was not loved back by my loved one
I never took seriously this silly little quote
But then one day i understood this quote is not a joke
All of the sudden it got so hot
I didnt know if i was dreaming or not
He wants me, he needs me, this new ray of sun
I love him and he loves me back my dreams now filled and done
I have another question still to ask
If the love ever stops does one ray of sun or both go back?
Once the sun is gone does it ever come back?
If not then all hearts would lifelessly crack
But also if the love is gone
No more feeling from my heart can be drawn
If we can share no love
Then is it worth the sun to come?
My how complicated is love!




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Re: If we can share no love, is it worth the sun to come? (User Rating: 1 )
by American_Beauty_in_dixie on Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 10:24:35 AM AEST
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I thoroughly enjoyed this...


Re: If we can share no love, is it worth the sun to come? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jishes_4_ever on Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 12:21:34 PM AEST
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you were right... I really enjoyed this.
It's a great poem. :)



Re: If we can share no love, is it worth the sun to come? (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchCorpuz on Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 02:57:32 PM AEST
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Love truly is complicated... and contradicting
most of the time. I've felt the same thing... and in my experience...
the sun never came to shine again...

Great poem... a Masterpiece!
Keep writing!

-Butch
-The Betrayer of Hope


Re: If we can share no love, is it worth the sun to come? (User Rating: 1 )
by MarLites on Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 10:36:35 AM AEST
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I like this one more. Very cleverly written
Mary




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