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My droopy eyes blankly gazed at the dripping
dews from the tender leaves, ripples of
thoughts that disturbed my inner tranquil pool;
rushing times erected columns of qualms in my life.

Will I? can I? should I? am I? A stormy weather rose
within, demolishing my cheerful self, leaving
behind a wrecked hare-brained human, doomed to
failure beyond healing; skeptical of my very life.

Inside the dripping dew drop I saw an angel, jovial
as your own crony next door, though arrested within the
tiny drop, that cheery face proved not a stress or sorrow
content within the tine drop a happy world of its own.

The unspoken screaming message, a clear tinkle of tolling bell of an
undisputed fact of life heard within, “to be-content with your providence.”
(FRANCO)
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AN ANGEL IN A DEW DROP.

Contributed by FRANCO on Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 08:19:04 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

My droopy eyes blankly gazed at the dripping
dews from the tender leaves, ripples of
thoughts that disturbed my inner tranquil pool;
rushing times erected columns of qualms in my life.

Will I? can I? should I? am I? A stormy weather rose
within, demolishing my cheerful self, leaving
behind a wrecked hare-brained human, doomed to
failure beyond healing; skeptical of my very life.

Inside the dripping dew drop I saw an angel, jovial
as your own crony next door, though arrested within the
tiny drop, that cheery face proved not a stress or sorrow
content within the tine drop a happy world of its own.

The unspoken screaming message, a clear tinkle of tolling bell of an
undisputed fact of life heard within, “to be-content with your providence.”
(FRANCO)

Copyright Â© FRANCO ... [ 2006-05-25 08:19:04]
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Re: AN ANGEL IN A DEW DROP. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 09:38:21 AM AEST
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This cowboy done heard Indian wisdom reflected in magnificent words and thought presentation. Franco, (fff) this sucker's awesome!

wabl
KenMoore
cowboy

Re: AN ANGEL IN A DEW DROP. (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 09:41:43 AM AEST
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soooo filled with imagination...and very visual. loved it.

Re: AN ANGEL IN A DEW DROP. (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 12:07:14 PM AEST
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Beautifully done Franco
nd Ken is so right. INDIAN wisdom, - I always knew, somehow within my subconscious.

the wisdom to be content with one's sort, unless the Almighty Lord stirs the chubby angel to ask for 'MORE", - for HE will give More if asked,
Very inspiring, - and one can visualize the scene so clearly.

Blessings
Elizabeth

Re: AN ANGEL IN A DEW DROP. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 05:44:54 AM AEST
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Wow, this write is very artistic and creatively beautifull.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: AN ANGEL IN A DEW DROP. (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 12:18:44 PM AEST
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Beautiful, descriptive and so warm to the heart.thank you

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