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Array ( [sid] => 12072 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Something to Believe In [time] => 2003-02-06 21:40:00 [hometext] => For Dean. He's one of the very few things in my life that makes me happy. [bodytext] => The lights burned out
And I walked out
'Cause there's too much in my head
This life is hell
And all I wanted
Was to know that we would be okay
But I can't breathe
When everything
Gets twisted inside out
'Cause I love you
And I need you
And I don't know what to believe in

All I want
Is these thoughts in my head to go away
All I need
Is for everyone who's trying to make me
Like the way they lie
To shut up and just scream till no one's listening
I don't hear you
And all I wanted was something to believe in

I see the
Worst parts of me
In everything they do
Without the good
And all the love
I've given until my heart was bleeding
Don't leave me there
'Cause I don't care
And I don't believe you
'Cause I see you
Right beside me
As I'm loving you and hating me

Why do I
Do everything I do and still have you
Why don't I
Understand what I feel the way you do
I prayed so much
And hated so much that it made me cry and you
Didn't know why
But all I wanted was something to believe in

Don't leave me alone
When I tell you to go away
Don't push me because
I'll just turn around and walk away
And I wish that you
Would follow me everywhere I go
'Cause what I have with you
Is something I think I'll believe in [comments] => 4 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 48 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Something to Believe In

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 09:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



The lights burned out
And I walked out
'Cause there's too much in my head
This life is hell
And all I wanted
Was to know that we would be okay
But I can't breathe
When everything
Gets twisted inside out
'Cause I love you
And I need you
And I don't know what to believe in

All I want
Is these thoughts in my head to go away
All I need
Is for everyone who's trying to make me
Like the way they lie
To shut up and just scream till no one's listening
I don't hear you
And all I wanted was something to believe in

I see the
Worst parts of me
In everything they do
Without the good
And all the love
I've given until my heart was bleeding
Don't leave me there
'Cause I don't care
And I don't believe you
'Cause I see you
Right beside me
As I'm loving you and hating me

Why do I
Do everything I do and still have you
Why don't I
Understand what I feel the way you do
I prayed so much
And hated so much that it made me cry and you
Didn't know why
But all I wanted was something to believe in

Don't leave me alone
When I tell you to go away
Don't push me because
I'll just turn around and walk away
And I wish that you
Would follow me everywhere I go
'Cause what I have with you
Is something I think I'll believe in




Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2003-02-06 21:40:00]
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Re: Something to Believe In (User Rating: 1 )
by Suzy on Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 09:55:29 PM AEST
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aww that's so sweet...Dean's a lucky guy. Isn't it nice when you have someone like that in your life...sounds exactly like my bestfriend Sam. Thanks for sharing this...

Lasca


Re: Something to Believe In (User Rating: 1 )
by Spasmodic_Reality on Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 03:07:49 AM AEST
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Doesn't Love Hurt..? either way..that's a very good poem..i can really relate to it..


Re: Something to Believe In (User Rating: 1 )
by TheSpiritx on Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 04:11:09 AM AEST
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You utilize excellent stylistic approaches in this piece. I enjoyed reading it.


Re: Something to Believe In (User Rating: 1 )
by Emmie74 on Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 07:43:51 PM AEST
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I make you happy, don't I?? I'm not pushing you out, am I? Who is? You can believe in me, can't you? I hope you still feel safe confiding in me.

Always,
Em




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