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[aid] => mick
[title] => God's Soldier
[time] => 2006-05-25 01:05:48
[hometext] => this is my first poem i ever wrote . tell me your honest opinion about it .
[bodytext] => My heart is like a rock Cold , silent , still It feels no pain , no joy My head is like a sword Knowing nothing , feeling nothing Expressing nothing It knows what I want to do but it won't Allow me to do it I can't control my body I try to tell my legs to stop running But they only go faster and faster But oh where are they running to ? I wish I knew , but I don't , no one does Except them I can't control my hands I don't know how to stop them Will they do right or wrong ? Only they know , cause I no longer control Them I am now nothing A person that can't control my body I am now my body's slave Will I ever break these chains ? No , they are to big to break Only God can break these chains I know he will , But when ? When will he come for me ? Only he knows the answer As I have told you , I know nothing but God I feel the chains getting tighter and tighter , When will this end ? I feel no pain but I do not want a numb body ! I know deep down I can feel the pain But I do not show it A person is nothing without God God is love and pain , you may ask " How can this be ? " But only you shall know the answer , no one Else Can you feel the chains tightening ? I now feel pain and hatred Why am I feeling these things ? Cause the devil is near I must break these chains He runs like the wind after me I have found the sword of light I cut my chains and feel love again I slash at the devil with my sword And down he goes on his knees Begging for his life to be spared Why should I spare this cowardly dog ? He knows no love , no glory , no honor He knows only evil But I must take him to my captain Cause I am God's soldier [comments] => 1 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 11 [informant] => greysteel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )
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