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Array ( [sid] => 120702 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => your heart is bleeding [time] => 2006-05-24 19:39:16 [hometext] => ...now it's grown a garden [bodytext] => bodies rotting not me often
sometimes itching quite so softly
it's just withdrawal can't you see?
bodies rotting pale hugs calling

bugs beneath my skin can't kiss
but deep within they bless me with
all the views to see death through
bugs will scratch and play catch too

easy now, it's time to fold
all my cards for you who sold
out yourself to one more pill
now it's me, your life you kill
confess it well and while you can
that now you're gone
try understand..

...your heart is bleeding

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your heart is bleeding

Contributed by In_a_While on Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 07:39:16 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

bodies rotting not me often
sometimes itching quite so softly
it's just withdrawal can't you see?
bodies rotting pale hugs calling

bugs beneath my skin can't kiss
but deep within they bless me with
all the views to see death through
bugs will scratch and play catch too

easy now, it's time to fold
all my cards for you who sold
out yourself to one more pill
now it's me, your life you kill
confess it well and while you can
that now you're gone
try understand..

...your heart is bleeding

dw

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Re: your heart is bleeding (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 01:20:26 AM AEST
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DW~
You make ur reader feel ur pain and sadness through ur words. I know it's a long and hard battle my dear friend, but u can do it. I have the utmost faith in u. You have come this far DW~ I'm so proud of you. Drugs numb our pain for awhile, but sadly only to return when the substance fades.
I wish u much brighter days ahead my dear friend. Ure always in my prayers DW~
hugs galore,
~*suzie Q*~

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