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Her tears fall freely from her eyes
Sadness reigns in her heart
All her smiles have been lies
Lies to fool others in her life
Her tears they must not see
For if they do find them
They will know she does not want to be
To try and stop her would be foolish
Her life is her own to take
She will succeed no matter what
Even if it is a mistake
Death should never be an option
But to her its a long awaited way out
She would never accept your help
But then again... you would never help her out

Time has passed now...
Her casket is being lowered into the ground
No one cries or has cried for her
Because there is no one around
Her family did not bother to show up
None of them cares that she's gone
Or of how she died on that day...
Of how she died completely alone
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Her Choice

Contributed by Kimbie on Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 01:57:52 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Darkness envelopes around her
Her tears fall freely from her eyes
Sadness reigns in her heart
All her smiles have been lies
Lies to fool others in her life
Her tears they must not see
For if they do find them
They will know she does not want to be
To try and stop her would be foolish
Her life is her own to take
She will succeed no matter what
Even if it is a mistake
Death should never be an option
But to her its a long awaited way out
She would never accept your help
But then again... you would never help her out

Time has passed now...
Her casket is being lowered into the ground
No one cries or has cried for her
Because there is no one around
Her family did not bother to show up
None of them cares that she's gone
Or of how she died on that day...
Of how she died completely alone

Copyright © Kimbie ... [ 2006-05-24 01:57:52]
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Re: Her Choice (User Rating: 1 )
by jujubee21 on Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 08:11:07 AM AEST
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very strong words

Re: Her Choice (User Rating: 1 )
by spider on Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 10:22:33 AM AEST
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that's terrible :( (not the poem, thats damn good)

i dont know if its about how you personally feel but everybody's family will care. even if they fight and seem like they couldn't give a crap - they do.

Re: Her Choice (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 11:27:14 AM AEST
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i really like this... ive felt this way so many times... but in the end i kept coming to the same conclusion: i care. i don't want to die. i changed my attitude and i noticed that because i cared, other people started caring too.

peace be with you
Jenny

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