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Array ( [sid] => 120629 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Why is it you, you, you? [time] => 2006-05-23 20:35:57 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Yes I know you have problems right now
you do deserve some attention
but I've found I'm started to sound like a broken record
"are you okay?"
"did I do something"
"could I help with something?"
I'm sorry that I care
I suppose I'll stop
I'm truley sorry
for everything
going out with you
telling you I liked you and always wanted to be with you
making it hard for you

you seem to think your nothing special
your dead wrong
you seem to think I'm not trying
your dead wrong
I am trying
the best I can
it's hard
you seem to think I should/would/ need to hate you
you know me better than that

you say you've been in my shoes
but the shoes I wear are one in a million
the shoes I wear have been battered and ripped
but I wear them and brag about them
I suppose you'll never know the history of my shoes
I suppose you'll never know why I still love and brag about them
I was gonna tell you but I dont want sympathy
because I know if told you
it would change your view about me
Yes I do want you to change your view about me
but not that way
you dont know what I've been through but it's prolly worse than what your going through

you think I'm an ****** about everything now
I will admit that I do forget
that there are people emotionally weaker than me
for that I apologize
if it makes you feel any better ask me
I'll prove that I've been through worse
All you have to do is ask [comments] => 4 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 50 [informant] => MrPerfect [notes] => |||||||Edited for profanity. - Moderator_14||||||| [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )
Why is it you, you, you?

Contributed by MrPerfect on Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 08:35:57 PM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry



Yes I know you have problems right now
you do deserve some attention
but I've found I'm started to sound like a broken record
"are you okay?"
"did I do something"
"could I help with something?"
I'm sorry that I care
I suppose I'll stop
I'm truley sorry
for everything
going out with you
telling you I liked you and always wanted to be with you
making it hard for you

you seem to think your nothing special
your dead wrong
you seem to think I'm not trying
your dead wrong
I am trying
the best I can
it's hard
you seem to think I should/would/ need to hate you
you know me better than that

you say you've been in my shoes
but the shoes I wear are one in a million
the shoes I wear have been battered and ripped
but I wear them and brag about them
I suppose you'll never know the history of my shoes
I suppose you'll never know why I still love and brag about them
I was gonna tell you but I dont want sympathy
because I know if told you
it would change your view about me
Yes I do want you to change your view about me
but not that way
you dont know what I've been through but it's prolly worse than what your going through

you think I'm an ****** about everything now
I will admit that I do forget
that there are people emotionally weaker than me
for that I apologize
if it makes you feel any better ask me
I'll prove that I've been through worse
All you have to do is ask




Copyright © MrPerfect ... [ 2006-05-23 20:35:57]
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Re: Why is it you, you, you? (User Rating: 1 )
by yaknowrobbie on Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 08:52:25 PM AEST
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I can definately relate to this poem, theres alot of drama queens in my schoool haha. Ne way nice poem, keep up the good work


Re: Why is it you, you, you? (User Rating: 1 )
by -xhaleyx- on Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 11:49:21 PM AEST
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ok...the part with the shoes.....k, that was awesome. I'd say this is the best one i've read so far.

-x haleyfer x-


Re: Why is it you, you, you? (User Rating: 1 )
by JordonsBaby17 on Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 11:12:17 PM AEST
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this really hit home with me, especailly lately. it shows me a guys point of view. very nice.


Re: Why is it you, you, you? (User Rating: 1 )
by randumbchit on Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 08:10:59 PM AEST
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this poem kind of gave me more respect for my boyfreind and made me realise that in some ways women can ask to much
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