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Old and young, young and old. We'll all be together at the world's threshold! And then what will matter? Surely not time! Your spirit has always been united with mine, ever since the beginning of time. Old and young. What an illusion! You look in the mirror and fall in confusion! All that you're seeing,

Is matter slowed down. People see a bruise, a wrinkle: they frown!
Young and old, old and young. The old think they have reason to talk to young like they're dumb. Old and young, young and old. The young think they have reason to walk all over old like they're mold. What is wrong with

the world today. Are we brand new, or are we decay? One things for sure! The spirit stays new, and everything in the world decays! So; what do we do with our remaining days? Id say, look to the beginning to learn how to end!

By China A Rivera
5/18/2006
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Old And Young, Young And Old

Contributed by ChinaRivera on Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 08:01:50 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Old And Young, Young And Old

Old and young, young and old. We'll all be together at the world's threshold! And then what will matter? Surely not time! Your spirit has always been united with mine, ever since the beginning of time. Old and young. What an illusion! You look in the mirror and fall in confusion! All that you're seeing,

Is matter slowed down. People see a bruise, a wrinkle: they frown!
Young and old, old and young. The old think they have reason to talk to young like they're dumb. Old and young, young and old. The young think they have reason to walk all over old like they're mold. What is wrong with

the world today. Are we brand new, or are we decay? One things for sure! The spirit stays new, and everything in the world decays! So; what do we do with our remaining days? Id say, look to the beginning to learn how to end!

By China A Rivera
5/18/2006

Copyright © ChinaRivera ... [ 2006-05-23 20:01:50]
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Re: Old And Young, Young And Old (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 01:39:45 AM AEST
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Awesome writing. wise u r.
huggs,
emy

Re: Old And Young, Young And Old (User Rating: 1 )
by spencer on Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 10:11:36 AM AEST
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that is the best poem i have read in quite a while congratulations on such a good peice of poetry.

Spencer

Re: Old And Young, Young And Old (User Rating: 1 )
by TwistedCage on Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 09:27:32 AM AEST
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I loved the theme, and it had a nice flow to it...the rhyming wasn't bad, and it looks good written down.

Good job!

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