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Array ( [sid] => 120593 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => dreaming of you [time] => 2006-05-23 12:12:33 [hometext] => have you had this dream? [bodytext] => Dreaming of you



I’ve watched so many reach for
What I want
I pushed a smile in front of tears
Basking in the hunt

Capture u, captivate your soul
Whisper like soft summer breeze
A thief u are my heart u stole
Give in to it

Why fight we both deserve this treasure
I too have been hurt
No promises I will show u better
No more pain

Lets make love not the physical part
Im talking the type of love
I think of something to say, out your mouth my words start
Can u handle it

Tell me and I, u plans b4 the day starts
We lay together your in my dreams
And to me we still to far apart
In distance there is no measure
@>~>~~~>~~
We could be two cities away
But I feel your love inside me
I feel Im your best friend
The secrets to your soul you confide in me

Together as we lay
Droplets of rain on us from the window on a rainy day
I lost my self in you and then began to prey
In this love I beg please let us stay

I never felt like this
I am a virgin please be gentle
Embrace my fears
I give you my body soul and my mental


I just wanna squeeze you so tight
And never let go
Love like 50 yrs from now and its still just so right
I give in to you

You my past, present and future
More than your man, I want what we both aint use to
Total commitment, total trust, total love
To see you smile, at me in heaven, id die for u
@>~>~~~>~~
And now I toss and turn to awake
Because things aren’t always what it seems
Relax my mind, deep breath I take
Realizing you are the girl in my dreams

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dreaming of you

Contributed by evolon on Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 12:12:33 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Dreaming of you



I’ve watched so many reach for
What I want
I pushed a smile in front of tears
Basking in the hunt

Capture u, captivate your soul
Whisper like soft summer breeze
A thief u are my heart u stole
Give in to it

Why fight we both deserve this treasure
I too have been hurt
No promises I will show u better
No more pain

Lets make love not the physical part
Im talking the type of love
I think of something to say, out your mouth my words start
Can u handle it

Tell me and I, u plans b4 the day starts
We lay together your in my dreams
And to me we still to far apart
In distance there is no measure
@>~>~~~>~~
We could be two cities away
But I feel your love inside me
I feel Im your best friend
The secrets to your soul you confide in me

Together as we lay
Droplets of rain on us from the window on a rainy day
I lost my self in you and then began to prey
In this love I beg please let us stay

I never felt like this
I am a virgin please be gentle
Embrace my fears
I give you my body soul and my mental


I just wanna squeeze you so tight
And never let go
Love like 50 yrs from now and its still just so right
I give in to you

You my past, present and future
More than your man, I want what we both aint use to
Total commitment, total trust, total love
To see you smile, at me in heaven, id die for u
@>~>~~~>~~
And now I toss and turn to awake
Because things aren’t always what it seems
Relax my mind, deep breath I take
Realizing you are the girl in my dreams





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Re: dreaming of you (User Rating: 1 )
by Sordida on Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 12:47:54 PM AEST
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I think I might have had a dream like this before. interesting read, I enjoyed it.


Re: dreaming of you (User Rating: 1 )
by Remi on Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 01:23:23 PM AEST
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nice job i like the order of it really great write


Re: dreaming of you (User Rating: 1 )
by MiZzUnDaZtOoD on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 06:53:00 PM AEST
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I liked this one alot.I like how u expressed your true feelings . I like to see the softer side of people see there true colors. u find u have alot more then u think in common with people. your not the oly one who had had this dream.
great write!


Re: dreaming of you (User Rating: 1 )
by epsftbllchic1617 on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 07:41:47 PM AEST
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I like the whole theme of the poem. Smart way to start and end it.




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