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Array ( [sid] => 120564 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Smiles Lost In Time [time] => 2006-05-22 22:12:11 [hometext] => Just read it.... [bodytext] =>

A christmas picture tells a story,
The story of 2 lives as 1,
What happened to those smiling faces,
Where did they go?
Lost in the arguements and depression,
Lost so long ago.
These 2 have both changed,
For better or worse,
I'm not quite sure...
Where are those smiling faces,
That were seen 2 years ago?

Crying alone, curled into a ball,
Layed in the cornor, left in depression,
We used to be so close,
Now it seems so far.

Before i met you,
I longed for the love everyone else feels
Now i have you,
I find again, i long for the same things,
Though i know i love you,
I know i can't stand the life we're living.

Just what happened to those smiling faces?
Why can't love just be more simple?
I told you before...
(Love me for my mind, 'cuz I'm a dangerous heart) [comments] => 3 [counter] => 270 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Froggy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Smiles Lost In Time

Contributed by Froggy on Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 10:12:11 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

A christmas picture tells a story,
The story of 2 lives as 1,
What happened to those smiling faces,
Where did they go?
Lost in the arguements and depression,
Lost so long ago.
These 2 have both changed,
For better or worse,
I'm not quite sure...
Where are those smiling faces,
That were seen 2 years ago?

Crying alone, curled into a ball,
Layed in the cornor, left in depression,
We used to be so close,
Now it seems so far.

Before i met you,
I longed for the love everyone else feels
Now i have you,
I find again, i long for the same things,
Though i know i love you,
I know i can't stand the life we're living.

Just what happened to those smiling faces?
Why can't love just be more simple?
I told you before...
(Love me for my mind, 'cuz I'm a dangerous heart)

Copyright © Froggy ... [ 2006-05-22 22:12:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Smiles Lost In Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 10:23:41 PM AEST
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are you a huge silverchair fan? good write
-silverheart-

Re: Smiles Lost In Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Shnyzz on Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 10:46:20 PM AEST
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Not too shabby....very good

Re: Smiles Lost In Time (User Rating: 1 )
by rphardy on Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 11:33:01 PM AEST
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I think you try to hard.
It's good but it does not make me feel your pain. I'd say close but no cigar.
Sorry :(

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