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[title] => tHe rOaD
[time] => 2006-05-22 21:45:10
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[bodytext] => As i look up I feel the warmth of the sun on my face...I look back and I see what i was just in...The rain..the thunder..the lightening...i collape and i realize i made it out of this stupid depression...i started crying and yelling out...I look at my hands and i see these scares will never heal...But it doesn't matter...Because this storm is behind mee...I am in a better pleace now...I get up and look out to what in front...the road look so clear and so long... i don't want to walk anymore..i am tried..so i sit there until i can get my strength back..and i get up and walk cause that all i can do...
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tHe rOaD
Contributed by
meaganmariee
on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 09:45:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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As i look up I feel the warmth of the sun on my face...I look back and I see what i was just in...The rain..the thunder..the lightening...i collape and i realize i made it out of this stupid depression...i started crying and yelling out...I look at my hands and i see these scares will never heal...But it doesn't matter...Because this storm is behind mee...I am in a better pleace now...I get up and look out to what in front...the road look so clear and so long... i don't want to walk anymore..i am tried..so i sit there until i can get my strength back..and i get up and walk cause that all i can do...
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Re: tHe rOaD
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by spencer on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 06:29:39 AM AEST
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| Fantastic! this is the best poem i've read today |
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Re: tHe rOaD
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by Lenny_Gazbowski on
Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 07:19:10 AM AEST
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I can empathise with you as I too suffer with depression. Well written with good use of imagery.
Lenny |
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Re: tHe rOaD
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by JerryKantrell on
Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 08:41:45 PM AEST
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| nice structure and analogy, you might want to check the spelling though. |
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