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Array ( [sid] => 120542 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hard To Accept [time] => 2006-05-22 16:12:21 [hometext] => I want to dedicate this to my brother who has just made his long journey home. [bodytext] => I wish I would have
seen you once again,
before you took your last breath,
and let you know how
much you really meant to me.
To let you realize,
what those frequent
visits actually meant to us.
You were our older brother,
who did not let
family fueds come between us.
Now everyday I wake up
wishing I could have been
there for you.
I wake up wishing our family
never split up in two.
I just wish things
were different,
because maybe that way
your eternal rest
would be easier to accept,
but I still keep waking up
thinking your going to
come over to play
video games and joke
like we used to.
It's just too hard to bear

Goodbye for now
until the day i see you again.
I Love You.
R.I.P
My dear brother [comments] => 2 [counter] => 203 [topic] => 65 [informant] => smilez101 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

Hard To Accept

Contributed by smilez101 on Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 04:12:21 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

I wish I would have
seen you once again,
before you took your last breath,
and let you know how
much you really meant to me.
To let you realize,
what those frequent
visits actually meant to us.
You were our older brother,
who did not let
family fueds come between us.
Now everyday I wake up
wishing I could have been
there for you.
I wake up wishing our family
never split up in two.
I just wish things
were different,
because maybe that way
your eternal rest
would be easier to accept,
but I still keep waking up
thinking your going to
come over to play
video games and joke
like we used to.
It's just too hard to bear

Goodbye for now
until the day i see you again.
I Love You.
R.I.P
My dear brother

Copyright © smilez101 ... [ 2006-05-22 16:12:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Hard To Accept (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 04:48:48 PM AEST
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Great write things like that are hard to accept keep em' comin

Re: Hard To Accept (User Rating: 1 )
by bluegirl on Sunday, 23rd January 2011 @ 01:39:35 AM AEST
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You wrote this poem with all your love. May your brother R.I.P

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