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Array ( [sid] => 120509 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I give up [time] => 2006-05-22 05:50:12 [hometext] => Been holding for so long and just don't think I can do it anymore.Also thought my acoholic days were over but they seem 2 be coming back. [bodytext] => I give up on this life.
How I end it I don't care.
Jumping, starving, drowning,cutting, bleeding or falling down the stair.
Bored of loneliness, cutting and drinking.
Never had many friends in this life.
Fed up of turning 2 the knife.
Depression making me drink.
Some days I can hardly think.
Just wanna lose all the pain and loneliness.
Just wanna get out of this world of blackness.
I give up on this life.
How I end it I don't care. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 238 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Kazzy1231 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

I give up

Contributed by Kazzy1231 on Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 05:50:12 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I give up on this life.
How I end it I don't care.
Jumping, starving, drowning,cutting, bleeding or falling down the stair.
Bored of loneliness, cutting and drinking.
Never had many friends in this life.
Fed up of turning 2 the knife.
Depression making me drink.
Some days I can hardly think.
Just wanna lose all the pain and loneliness.
Just wanna get out of this world of blackness.
I give up on this life.
How I end it I don't care.

Copyright © Kazzy1231 ... [ 2006-05-22 05:50:12]
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Re: I give up (User Rating: 1 )
by Sordida on Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 06:25:12 AM AEST
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I used to be just like this. It's a horrible feeling.

Re: I give up (User Rating: 1 )
by Remi on Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 09:37:36 AM AEST
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nice write i understand what you are going thru keep ya head up

Re: I give up (User Rating: 1 )
by Davinah on Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 09:38:13 AM AEST
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Don't end it yourself darling. If you end your life yourself, you will have to go through the same misery again in your next life. I truly believe in that, but I guess it all depends on what YOU believe.

There is however a reason for everything, also suffering. And we ALL have to go through it alone.

Be strong!

Davinah

Re: I give up (User Rating: 1 )
by yackerz85 on Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 02:40:26 PM AEST
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When all else is bleak, only Jesus is who I seek. Dedicate your life to worshiping the only thing that is real in this world, God. No life is worth throwing away. Please consider my words.

Re: I give up (User Rating: 1 )
by EddieDean on Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 04:08:53 PM AEST
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Thi is gonna sound wierd but an Alaskain crab fisherman said something that I keep forever in my heart. He said "Life may suck, but the alternative is not an option."

-Eddie Dean

Re: I give up (User Rating: 1 )
by Shyne on Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 06:40:47 PM AEST
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I've been through the same pain in my life. Just look up to the sky and pray that there will be better days. You are special and of course Jesus loves ya. YOU WILL BE DELIVERED!!!

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