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Array ( [sid] => 120507 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What it takes..... [time] => 2006-05-22 04:41:16 [hometext] => What it takes to let you go- Aerosmith [bodytext] => Tell me,
What it takes.
What it takes
To let you go.
I need to move on.

You broke my heart,
Hurt me deeply.
And I need to let you go.

What it takes.

What will it take?
You memories are hurting,
They are bringing me down.
You are mad at me,
And the feeling is mutual.

But why can't I move on?
I need you out,
Out of my mind,
Out of my heart,
Out of my soul.

But I miss your friendship,
I miss your voice.
Please,
Accept my apology.

I am sorry.

But do you want my friendship?
Do I want yours?
I do not know.

What does it take to let you go?

Well......what does it take....to let you out of my life........ [comments] => 2 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 55 [informant] => EddieDean [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

What it takes.....

Contributed by EddieDean on Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 04:41:16 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Tell me,
What it takes.
What it takes
To let you go.
I need to move on.

You broke my heart,
Hurt me deeply.
And I need to let you go.

What it takes.

What will it take?
You memories are hurting,
They are bringing me down.
You are mad at me,
And the feeling is mutual.

But why can't I move on?
I need you out,
Out of my mind,
Out of my heart,
Out of my soul.

But I miss your friendship,
I miss your voice.
Please,
Accept my apology.

I am sorry.

But do you want my friendship?
Do I want yours?
I do not know.

What does it take to let you go?

Well......what does it take....to let you out of my life........

Copyright © EddieDean ... [ 2006-05-22 04:41:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: What it takes..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Sony_Boat on Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 11:50:15 PM AEST
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If they do not accept, then one must forgive themselves. Other than that, I am not sure. And not sure if time will erase feelings, it might thin them out some as time goes by. Talk, patience, time. Very enjoyable write and read.

Re: What it takes..... (User Rating: 1 )
by MandiLee on Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 07:13:49 PM AEST
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WOW you were on a Aerosmith kick... its amazing your use of words so honest and sweet. so did they acceot your apology?
-MaNDI

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