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Array ( [sid] => 12049 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => War [time] => 2003-02-06 13:00:00 [hometext] => its kinda thoughts i had, how i don't want us to go to war b/c i'm afraid, i'll end up havin' to fight, but, all along knowin' there is no real way to avoid it [bodytext] => Words
Are hard
To come by
When you're me

War is so uneasy
Maybe
I'll be made to fight
If they got to draft
I'll fight
But
I don't want to

Mommy
Are they are gonna
Hurt me
Am I gonna live
To see 21
Or will I die
For my country

Die
Alone
With no one to love
Die the virgin
Die
And make so many people
Cry

I don't want you to mourn
At my funeral
Be happy
I'm in a better place
And I died
Doin' what you wanted
Me to do
Smile
You know
I don't like it
When you cry

Cause
Soldiers come
And
Soldiers go
Iraq
Is got it comin'
And I might go
You always wanted me
To fight
But
I don't want to die
So
Lets hope
They don't got to draft
Poor folks
Like me

But
To all you
Brave
Mother *****
In our armies
Waitin' for war
Waitin' to protect
Your country
Thanks
You're our heroes
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 43 [informant] => ml02 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
War

Contributed by ml02 on Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 01:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Words
Are hard
To come by
When you're me

War is so uneasy
Maybe
I'll be made to fight
If they got to draft
I'll fight
But
I don't want to

Mommy
Are they are gonna
Hurt me
Am I gonna live
To see 21
Or will I die
For my country

Die
Alone
With no one to love
Die the virgin
Die
And make so many people
Cry

I don't want you to mourn
At my funeral
Be happy
I'm in a better place
And I died
Doin' what you wanted
Me to do
Smile
You know
I don't like it
When you cry

Cause
Soldiers come
And
Soldiers go
Iraq
Is got it comin'
And I might go
You always wanted me
To fight
But
I don't want to die
So
Lets hope
They don't got to draft
Poor folks
Like me

But
To all you
Brave
Mother *****
In our armies
Waitin' for war
Waitin' to protect
Your country
Thanks
You're our heroes




Copyright © ml02 ... [ 2003-02-06 13:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: War (User Rating: 1 )
by mckayla on Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 01:25:45 PM AEST
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How else could you feel? Its so sad. Great poem!

mckayla


Re: War (User Rating: 1 )
by Good_King_Bragi on Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 11:49:07 AM AEST
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Behold.......the real Glory of War. ml02 illustrates the more real side of war-far more accurate than what your 'government' wnats you people to think.




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