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Into the depths of death
Take it all away
Take my last breath

I can't take the pain
Bring it to an end
I just can't start over,
My heart is too broken to mend

Don't try to change my mind
Let my thoughts be
Maybe this is right
Perhaps suicide is my destiny
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My Destiny

Contributed by lilbabe on Saturday, 20th May 2006 @ 11:26:23 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Pull me down
Into the depths of death
Take it all away
Take my last breath

I can't take the pain
Bring it to an end
I just can't start over,
My heart is too broken to mend

Don't try to change my mind
Let my thoughts be
Maybe this is right
Perhaps suicide is my destiny

Copyright Â© lilbabe ... [ 2006-05-20 11:26:23]
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Re: My Destiny (User Rating: 1 )
by EddieDean on Saturday, 20th May 2006 @ 08:46:51 PM AEST
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LIfe may suck, but the alternative is not an option. We've all had out backs to the wall at one time or another. Keep your head high and keep going man.

Re: My Destiny (User Rating: 1 )
by Brasco on Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 12:14:40 PM AEST
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I don’t know your situation and I won’t pretend that I do, but to me giving up is like letting your opponent win. I say fight, if death must take you, die on your feet, die fighting back. One man’s opinion.

Re: My Destiny (User Rating: 1 )
by Nothingness on Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 07:55:04 AM AEST
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Really good write but listen to me sure life can be hell I know how life really does suck I’m still a teen and I have had my share of hurt I’m sure most of us have but you cant give up this is just a part of life and growing to become a stronger person I know it seems frustrating and hopeless but suicide isn’t the answer it never is my boy friends committed suicide and every one around him was so hurt by it you have talent hun you really do keep writing out your feelings and whenever you feel down send me a message I will talk to you please though don’t give up just yet

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