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Array ( [sid] => 120402 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => lonesome [time] => 2006-05-19 18:59:46 [hometext] => havent wrote in a long time and i lost my flare so this is what i came up with in the past 5 mins comments much needed [bodytext] => lonesome
all day long i sit and talk with people
invisible i do feel
alone with no one surrounding
my heart is pounding with sensations
to being lonesome

i help as it is asked of me
sense of need or want frome others
feed the ever growing hunger
of acceptance

i get off the bus and in the woods again
alone with no one
not even a friend
i live in my own personal solitary of hell

lonesome with my self to try and find
a place where i can run and hide
thow knowing it not possible i sit strong
all by my lonesome [comments] => 2 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 32 [informant] => crazy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

lonesome

Contributed by crazy on Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 06:59:46 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

lonesome
all day long i sit and talk with people
invisible i do feel
alone with no one surrounding
my heart is pounding with sensations
to being lonesome

i help as it is asked of me
sense of need or want frome others
feed the ever growing hunger
of acceptance

i get off the bus and in the woods again
alone with no one
not even a friend
i live in my own personal solitary of hell

lonesome with my self to try and find
a place where i can run and hide
thow knowing it not possible i sit strong
all by my lonesome

Copyright © crazy ... [ 2006-05-19 18:59:46]
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Re: lonesome (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 20th May 2006 @ 03:00:26 AM AEST
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Awesome writing. Know the feeling.
huggs,
emy

Re: lonesome (User Rating: 1 )
by romance_pyro on Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 03:00:31 PM AEST
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It is hard to find that one person who accepts you but being lonesome isnt so bad because it drives the desire to be better than everyone else...just dont become cocky...er :D good write Jess keep it up

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